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08-24-2009 | #1 |
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Naruto Doujin (Offsite)
I recently stumbled on this at DA. http://enock.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-Period-122625597
I hope you will enjoy. Ny the way is there any similar doujin out there with the same premise? |
08-24-2009 | #2 |
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Re: Naruto Doujin
Not too shabby; can't wait to see how it progresses!
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08-24-2009 | #3 |
Happiness in detachment
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Re: Naruto Doujin
Hmm... I don't like it.
The artwork is good. It looks like a lot of time was dedicated to the linework. It's the writing that's killing me. Fourth wall breaking in a reality that doesn't constantly see it. Plot rushing. Bad event staging. Akward dialogue, not to mention significant deviations from established character. It doesn't feel right to me. Good find for those who feel different about it than I do. I also don't like the author's attitude much. Taking such a hostile, pre-emptive tone towards viewers doesn't exactly convince me to stick with it. I don't agree with the author's intent for conceiving this series, but that alone is hardly a reason for me to back away. You guys know me by now; when it comes to TF, I dislike hostility. I find more error in the composition, though, than the originating idea. Last edited by Styerion; 08-24-2009 at 10:36 PM. |
08-25-2009 | #4 |
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Re: Naruto Doujin
looks good.
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08-25-2009 | #5 |
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Re: Naruto Doujin
Styerion... You're not to familiar with anime fandom communities, are you? The author's hostile tone is actually well deserved, considering how utterly obsessive some fans are when it comes to fan-art and fan-pairings and all that shit.
Either way, it's pretty interesting. The plot is a little rushed, but it's not really that bad. I'll be keeping an eye on it, at least. |
08-25-2009 | #6 |
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08-26-2009 | #7 |
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Re: Naruto Doujin
Hm. Infinity-Sign did another Naruto TG.
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08-26-2009 | #8 |
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Re: Naruto Doujin
And isn't fourth-wall breaking/etc all part and parcel of most animes?
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