BESC Pranked with a Kiss

EchoWing · 01-27-2012

My apologies for launching a separate thread for this, but as I said in my thread for "As You Wish", another story I've submitted to the BESC is online and available for reading entitled "Pranked With A Kiss". I'm looking for feedback.

So, any thoughts, or are you all sick of me?

mr--clean · 01-27-2012

Never heard of BESC

01-27-2012

Breast Expansion Story Club

EchoWing · 02-03-2012

...well, I'm getting the odd feeling that folks didn't like this story. That's saddening.

sencho · 02-03-2012

You shouldn't assume that. In my case my finances have kept me from having a BESC membership for a long time. The second commenter didn't even know of the BESC. So I'd suggest not worrying about it.

EchoWing · 02-03-2012

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Originally Posted by sencho

You shouldn't assume that. In my case my finances have kept me from having a BESC membership for a long time. The second commenter didn't even know of the BESC. So I'd suggest not worrying about it.

Fair enough. Still, I appreciate feedback; if nothing else, it'll help me to write better stuff for them in the future.

catfish27 · 02-03-2012

The description does sound appealing, but I'm waiting a few months until I (re-)subscribe to the BESC for a month -- can't really afford to subscribe continuously.

Leif · 02-04-2012

Story is fine.. I'm just more of a Comic guy

EchoWing · 02-10-2012

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Originally Posted by Leif

Story is fine.. I'm just more of a Comic guy

Truthfully, so am I, but I have a lot more fun writing prose. I'm just glad that folks aren't outright protesting it.

Scorch · 02-10-2012

Pff, i'm not subscibing to anything. I demand free content...cos i'm poor.

Nah, i enjoy comics more, but your story does sound interesting.

fredzor · 02-11-2012

I tried a membership twice. I wasn't a fan of any of the stories. They're all really heavy on the mind-control and light on the BE. Not saying yours is like that, but I found that to be true with most of them.

Muhznit · 02-11-2012

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Originally Posted by fredzor

I tried a membership twice. I wasn't a fan of any of the stories. They're all really heavy on the mind-control and light on the BE. Not saying yours is like that, but I found that to be true with most of them.

That's probably Kris. P. Kreme's stuff you've been reading. He was originally an author for mcstories.com with a penchant for bimbofication.

01-27-2012	#1
EchoWing Process Master Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 837	BESC Pranked with a Kiss My apologies for launching a separate thread for this, but as I said in my thread for "As You Wish", another story I've submitted to the BESC is online and available for reading entitled "Pranked With A Kiss". I'm looking for feedback. So, any thoughts, or are you all sick of me?

01-27-2012	#2
mr--clean Renegade of Funk Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 59	Re: BESC Pranked with a Kiss Never heard of BESC __________________ You might be able to beat me, but thats only because im laughing to hard to dodge

01-27-2012	#3
PyroManiac Guest Posts: n/a	Re: BESC Pranked with a Kiss Breast Expansion Story Club

02-03-2012	#4
EchoWing Process Master Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 837	Re: BESC Pranked with a Kiss ...well, I'm getting the odd feeling that folks didn't like this story. That's saddening.

02-03-2012	#5
sencho Lurker d'jur Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 58	Re: BESC Pranked with a Kiss You shouldn't assume that. In my case my finances have kept me from having a BESC membership for a long time. The second commenter didn't even know of the BESC. So I'd suggest not worrying about it.

02-03-2012	#7
catfish27 Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 442	Re: BESC Pranked with a Kiss The description does sound appealing, but I'm waiting a few months until I (re-)subscribe to the BESC for a month -- can't really afford to subscribe continuously.

02-04-2012	#8
Leif Process Fan Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 56	Re: BESC Pranked with a Kiss Story is fine.. I'm just more of a Comic guy

02-10-2012	#10
Scorch Process Master Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 742	Re: BESC Pranked with a Kiss Pff, i'm not subscibing to anything. I demand free content...cos i'm poor. Nah, i enjoy comics more, but your story does sound interesting. __________________ Torn-City - Massively multiplayer online text based RPG

02-11-2012	#11
fredzor Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 200	Re: BESC Pranked with a Kiss I tried a membership twice. I wasn't a fan of any of the stories. They're all really heavy on the mind-control and light on the BE. Not saying yours is like that, but I found that to be true with most of them.