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Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 457
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Image SGX Poster
For those who have seen my AR comic and asked about the story it comes from, here's your answer.
I am currently creating an original fan project called Sky Golem X, which is a Fantasy based mecha series and has everything from action, comedy, horror, drama, romance, you name it it has it. The characters you see her are actually based off my highschool anime club and such a group of very diverse individuals with uniqe skills and origins was perfect for the group in my story. The story (the short version) is about a girl named Naomi (front-center) who is suddenly transported into a parallel world where the same group of friends she knows in her world exist in this one as well. upon her arrival, she discovers that some crystaline lfie-form has merged with her and she can transform (sometimes at will and some times not) into a big almost living glass like flying mecha. This parallel world is somewhat like middle-earth (with basic fantasy characters and elements), but in the early 1900s. this world also has Massive Airships and Flying Mecha that are made from 1930s and 40s era technology, the mechs are called sky golems (they kind of look like the veritechs from robotech in Ger-walk mode, but resemble old prop planes). In this world, there had been a war in which an industiral empire has siezed control of the various territories. Naomi's Freind's "alternates" are a former rebel airship crew that has drifted apart after loosing the war and are trying to adjust to life in the "occupied world" the empire has created. Naomi's arrival in this world and her quest to find the way back home, and unlock the mystery of the Golem X ,re-unites this group for one last adventure and helps Naomi to realize how much she holds this group as well as the one in her world together. In this quest, that takes the group across this fantasy world, Naomi and her freinds find themselves pursued by the empire, cut-throat air pirates and others who seek the unlimited potential the Golem X and the Crystaline Life-form posesses. With numerous side strories and plot twists, this epic has a great deal of potential and who knows, some day could become a published series, until then however I'm just gonna have fun with it. Here is a poster I have made for the series with the characters and their airship pictured here. I hope to post more and maybe do some comic strips later on down the road. Please comment on this Idea and If you have any questions about the characters or the story, let me know.
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After years of research and countless hours of labor, a lone scientist finally discovered the secret to a new generation Shrink Ray that had the ability to shrink clothes... ...Thank goodness I was able to silence him before he told anyone. |
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Process Disciple
Join Date: May 2006
Location: London
Posts: 1,427
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It sounds interesting. Personally I`d love to read the story esecially with your artwork in it.
Only suggestion, that new characters should be introduced as the story progresses, both good and evil, young to old(no elderly people if possible) The only question I can think of asking is that whether you could have Age regression, Age progression, Giantess, and Shrinking woman elements. In the age regression, the other characters could blush and say how cute the regressed person is, pinch their cheek and so. Process must have baggy clothing Age progression, should happen to the youngest chracter. other characters say how beautiful or handsome the progressed person is. some hopefully envious of the progressed new body. Giantess, while clothes are being torn, must find a way to clothe themselves before the process stops. Shrinking woman, You are very good at this. blushing while shrinking, baggy chlothing. Trips on her socks. shows how clothes dont fit body such as breasts too small for bra, or skirt having a lot of empty space and nds up falling down. I dont mind if you have both guys and girls go throgh these four processes. That makes the story more interesting. |
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