BESC Pranked with a Kiss

[EchoWing]

My apologies for launching a separate thread for this, but as I said in my thread for "As You Wish", another story I've submitted to the BESC is online and available for reading entitled "Pranked With A Kiss". I'm looking for feedback.

So, any thoughts, or are you all sick of me?

[mr--clean]

Never heard of BESC

Breast Expansion Story Club

[EchoWing]

...well, I'm getting the odd feeling that folks didn't like this story. That's saddening.

[sencho]

You shouldn't assume that. In my case my finances have kept me from having a BESC membership for a long time. The second commenter didn't even know of the BESC. So I'd suggest not worrying about it.

[EchoWing]

Originally Posted by sencho

You shouldn't assume that. In my case my finances have kept me from having a BESC membership for a long time. The second commenter didn't even know of the BESC. So I'd suggest not worrying about it.

Fair enough. Still, I appreciate feedback; if nothing else, it'll help me to write better stuff for them in the future.

[catfish27]

The description does sound appealing, but I'm waiting a few months until I (re-)subscribe to the BESC for a month -- can't really afford to subscribe continuously.

[Leif]

Story is fine.. I'm just more of a Comic guy

[EchoWing]

Originally Posted by Leif

Story is fine.. I'm just more of a Comic guy

Truthfully, so am I, but I have a lot more fun writing prose. I'm just glad that folks aren't outright protesting it.

[Scorch]

Pff, i'm not subscibing to anything. I demand free content...cos i'm poor.

Nah, i enjoy comics more, but your story does sound interesting.

[fredzor]

I tried a membership twice. I wasn't a fan of any of the stories. They're all really heavy on the mind-control and light on the BE. Not saying yours is like that, but I found that to be true with most of them.

[Muhznit]

Originally Posted by fredzor

I tried a membership twice. I wasn't a fan of any of the stories. They're all really heavy on the mind-control and light on the BE. Not saying yours is like that, but I found that to be true with most of them.

That's probably Kris. P. Kreme's stuff you've been reading. He was originally an author for mcstories.com with a penchant for bimbofication.