BESC Pranked with a Kiss

[EchoWing]

Originally Posted by fredzor

I tried a membership twice. I wasn't a fan of any of the stories. They're all really heavy on the mind-control and light on the BE. Not saying yours is like that, but I found that to be true with most of them.

I'm more the opposite. This community will have to forgive me, but I'm not a big fan of mind control; if a girl in my story is going to have her body changed, it's going to be (for the most part) of her own volition and not due to outside influence.

[Bobking11]

I read it, much better than your last with a lot more focus on the expansion than story telling. Keep up the good work.

[satistaspawn]

I agree with Leif, I do read stories every now and then but I like the comics so much better. haven't gotten around to reading your story yet sorry.

[Vengeance1701]

The problem is...I can get stories for free a bunch of places....fully drawn comics, not so much.

If I were BESC, I'd actually recommend a subservice catering to the comics fans.

[bstgate]

Originally Posted by EchoWing

I'm more the opposite. This community will have to forgive me, but I'm not a big fan of mind control; if a girl in my story is going to have her body changed, it's going to be (for the most part) of her own volition and not due to outside influence.

Hear, hear!

[EchoWing]

Originally Posted by Bobking11

I read it, much better than your last with a lot more focus on the expansion than story telling. Keep up the good work.

Thanks. Ironically, I wrote this long before I wrote 'As You Wish'. For some crazy reason, though, the later work got published first.

Still, I appreciate the critique. I'll keep it in mind with future works.