Midna BE Story

AhziDahaka · 12-01-2008

Shave my legs and call me grandma, we've got new art AND story segment in one day!

Awesome, guys. Seriously, awesome.

As for critiques, I'd have to say the comments in parenthesis, especially about her eyesight, were pretty much unnecessary and explained what was essentially obvious, unrelated, or what could have been better conveyed without parenthesis. Other than that, nothing really popped out at me

12-01-2008	#20
AhziDahaka This is a user title. Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 383	Re: Midna BE Story Shave my legs and call me grandma, we've got new art AND story segment in one day! Awesome, guys. Seriously, awesome. As for critiques, I'd have to say the comments in parenthesis, especially about her eyesight, were pretty much unnecessary and explained what was essentially obvious, unrelated, or what could have been better conveyed without parenthesis. Other than that, nothing really popped out at me

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