New TF Story

[oxdaman]

Hey there Orange! I finally figured out how to navigate the forum (I'm not that bright I know) Now I get to finally give comments on the rest of your stories! Although it feels weird writing them like this when everything is here already lol. Oh well, I'll just comment as I finish each chapter.

So I just read chapter 10 (I think). The question that's probably going to go through my head as I read the rest of the chapters until it's answer is "how long until the army shows up?" Anyway, my biggest surprise is what happened to Mary after the last chapter. I honestly thought that she was going to barricade herself in the apartment with the car. Didn't think that she'd EAT the car and everything else. What's more, she started forgetting what she looked like? I can't even begin to say how bad a sign that is. And though her plan to make the police flee without hurting anyone worked, either way the army is bound to show up at some point.

One has to wonder how long Katie will stick with Mary. More importantly, how will this all end for Mary? In a test tube? 6 feet under? (Wait, that'd be bad). A happy ending doesn't appear to be in site right now.

Great chapter! Can't wait to read the rest!