A Sword in the Grotto

Apsm · 10-06-2013

For something which is technically "character death", which is a peeve of mine in tg fiction, I kinda like the way it was written with the physical and mental changes. One of the best processes I've read.

Hope to see more of your work. ^^

EDIT: I just noticed you mentioned about having a DeviantArt account. I find it strange that you would post one story at a time rather than the link. Is your page down, or do you want separate opinions on each work?

10-06-2013	#6
Apsm Lurker/budding TG author Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 269	Re: A Sword in the Grotto For something which is technically "character death", which is a peeve of mine in tg fiction, I kinda like the way it was written with the physical and mental changes. One of the best processes I've read. Hope to see more of your work. ^^ EDIT: I just noticed you mentioned about having a DeviantArt account. I find it strange that you would post one story at a time rather than the link. Is your page down, or do you want separate opinions on each work? __________________ -Male characters I like to see TG'd: Koizumi (Haruhi), Shinji (EVA), Keitaro (Love Hina), Satoshi (DNAngel) -Female characters I'd like to be (Update): Rei (EVA), Ami and Haruka (Sailor Moon), Nene (BGC2040), Teletha (FMP), Haruhi and Mikuru(Haruhi Suzumiya), Yourichi and Rangiku (Bleach), Riza(FMA), Lenalee (D Gray Man), Ennis (Baccano). Last edited by Apsm; 10-06-2013 at 10:17 PM.

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