New schoolgirl TG sequence

Very nice contribution, emphasin. It's clear that you put a good amount of time and effort into it.

As a niggling criticism, I'd point out that teenage girls tend not to refer to their mothers as 'Mommy' (or be on speaking terms with them in the first place :P).

Originally Posted by Very_Good_Karma

In the 5th and 6th panels, did his clothes just disappear?

Originally Posted by bacattack

You do need to make the sudden loss and reappearance of clothes more apparent though. You almost lost me and I needed to go back and see what you meant by that.

I'm pretty sure that we're supposed to be seeing through the clothes, given that it doesn't make any sense whatsoever for the pants to disappear, reappear, and then change into something else.