So I'm Working on a Story...

[kyuven]

And it's going to be quite a doozy. Here are the first three chapters, and I'd like opinions. I'm posting it here because...well, it fits (lots of Monster TFs, demon TFs, and the like. No actual furries or TG, as they aren't my bag.)
I've purpose had the TFs in this story last over a very long span of time (over a month passes and the main character doesn't even have the real physical changes yet)
It's also rather vanilla...for now.

Plot: There's this city, called the Transient City, where people, places, and things that are lost end up. It's a massive metropolis, and humans cannot exist there. Anyone who is lost, changes. Yuri is one of those people.
It's also about her brother and his search for her.
I'm also trying to address some real themes with the story, so don't go in expecting pure fetishy fun time (though it has or will have plenty of that.)

Anyway, lemme know what you folks think...

*EDIT* Revisions for Chapter 1-3 uploaded.