Do you like possession? I run a blog for it.

[tayaya]

i think you should try do it in panels, individual pictures doesn't draw the story too well because most people don't remember what happen before the next picture. It is easier to use panels to follow up a story.

Sorry to say, i don't have much interest in rendered picture just because it is hard to pick up and usually story is slow when you render like that it feel a bit tiresome cycle the pictures. But that's my opinion.