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06-18-2014
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Join Date: Jun 2006
Posts: 132
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Re: Arnaud, petit à petit (French Story)
Hi Aiko.
The story so far seems a little bit flat. Starting a story with blunt physical descriptions is weird. "She was short, hand brown hair, etc." Not something I'd pay $10 for. Mais si tu veux l'offrir à la communauté anglophone, je peux servir comme traducteur. |
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