My first try at a story: Internet Shopping - Part 1

Shenaynay222 · 06-19-2014

Hey people

Just wrote the first part/chapter/whatever you want to call it on writing.com, and I thought i'd share it here to see what you think.

http://www.writing.com/main/view_ite...hopping-Part-1

The story is about Evan, a boy who after trying to buy a magic transformation for his girlfriend, realizes that he was not allowed to pick a target for the spell other than himself.

The first part sees that Evan's first order is inflicted upon himself, and then he tries to hide it. He doesn't become a full out girl in this chapter, but he does make it part of the way(His breasts grow). For the most part, it's a slow change, happening over a number of days.

Anyways, I'd love your feedback! Thanks!

06-19-2014	#1
Shenaynay222 Leecher Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 9	My first try at a story: Internet Shopping - Part 1 Hey people Just wrote the first part/chapter/whatever you want to call it on writing.com, and I thought i'd share it here to see what you think. http://www.writing.com/main/view_ite...hopping-Part-1 The story is about Evan, a boy who after trying to buy a magic transformation for his girlfriend, realizes that he was not allowed to pick a target for the spell other than himself. The first part sees that Evan's first order is inflicted upon himself, and then he tries to hide it. He doesn't become a full out girl in this chapter, but he does make it part of the way(His breasts grow). For the most part, it's a slow change, happening over a number of days. Anyways, I'd love your feedback! Thanks!