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Unread 09-01-2021   #9
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Re: Tinier Treatment - Shrink Fan Comics

Having just read part 2, it was an interesting conclusion to the story.

The art work still holds up. It does a good job at showing off the scale of her size. This is best seen in the scenes following her shrinking.

The story is good. Did a great job in showing Glynis emotional states as she shrinks. Then continuing on in spite of what may happen. I appreciate how there is a happier ending for Glynis.

That said, I don't understand Les's plan. I'm not sure what he had hoped to gain from what he was doing. Also, there is no explanation of what happened with the shrinking ointment. I think it is also a missed opportunity to see how Les's ending plays out.

"Tinier Treatment 2" is a good sequel. It is as good if not better than part one. It is definitely worth a read.
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