Upcoming Descent - Shrink Fan Comics

[Captain Ash]

I liked the story, it has slow shrinking and lots of shrinking-of-the-clothes stuff.
Also like the reaction of Renee and what consequences her new size would mean to her.

A little explaination what happened to the kitchen wouldn't have hurt, but I guess that one of Tyler's experiments went wrong and he blew it up.

Though I like Renee charater design, both written and drawn, someone should have programmed Tyler some more emotions.
I know that in contrary to Renee he is supposed to be reserved, but if a woman is shrinking in front of you, you could even show a bit more scientistic enthusiasm.
Like: "Shrink in the name of science" or "You are part of the greatest scientific experiement of mankind that could change the foundation of the world forever - are you excited?" or "Just one more test... "

Since this issue is not the end of the story, I hope that we will see soon the second part of it.