Midna BE Story

[Gaea]

I wonder what kind of explanation will placate Ilia...Any way, which ever way this story goes, I know it will be great. Kudos to theshoelace

Thanks and thanks .
Wrote a small piece for Cremia. Decided to make it Cow TF. Why? Because I like those a lot.

'' Cremia woke up, shortly after falling asleep. Things seemed out of place somehow- it was really warm and uncomfortable. She stepped out of her bed, quite sweaty. Her back hurt, and her heart beat really fast. She groaned, and went to her bathroom, to take a look in the mirror. She let her arms rest on the sink as she looked at her own face. Suddenly, a strange sensation shot through her. ‘‘ Oh!’’, she said, surprised. Her heartbeat suddenly increased more in speed.

She looked at her bust, because something looked different about it. Her white blouse looked tight somehow. The strange sensation went through her again, and this time while she looked at her bust where the feeling was- she looked in amazement as she saw her breasts swell up, her white blouse fitting even tighter- they pushed forward her orange ascot. She hardly understood why or what to do- there was no one within several hundreds of metres that could help her.

The sensation went through her again, and her breasts finally destroyed the blouse. Cremia couldn’t help but shriek, but immediatly put her hand on her mouth. Suddenly, two places on her head started hurting- and in mere seconds two horns emerged from her head. The pain in her back seemed to move down- and she couldn’t help shrieking when a brand new tail burst out of her, through her dress. The strange feeling moved to her buttocks and hips- her dress started fitting tight as they swelled.

Her hips became as good as twice as broad, as her butt swelled up. It started leaving a clear imprint in her loose dress. Her face blushed as she looked at herself. Her concentration moved from cange to change- she glanced back at her horns when she noticed her ears were now cow-like as well. Her skin started burning in many places and she saw her skin darken in some places until it stopped. She looked at herself- she was a cow horned- and eared, large breasted, cowgirl.

She glanced at the clock- it was five in the morning. Romani would be waking up in one hour to milk the cows. ‘‘ And... I am a cow...’’, she said to herself. She wondered how she could get out of this, and why it happened.''

[Forze]

Not a fan of cowgirls, or any sort of animal-girl in general. However, the story is, as always, quality, and written superbly.

[AhziDahaka]

At least she doesn't have an udder, Forze :P

[Forze]

I thank Mr. Shoe sincerely for not going that route...:P

[cyero]

<3

Heh... I was doubtful about how far to do this TF, so I kept it down. I was going to ask whether or not you'd like her more transformed: That is, cow-feet.
See, I used the cow TF because the magic spell ended up in milk that already held powerful magic, unlike the goat milk, which was plain goat milk ( though it was cursed ).

... Would you say that the use of an udder or udders would cross ''the orange line''?

Well, anyway, I better get to the Anju piece.

[Forze]

I only speak for myself when I ask you to keep the TF to a minimum. However, in this case, it is logical, and if you want to do it, this story should be what you want, not other people.

Originally Posted by Forze

I only speak for myself when I ask you to keep the TF to a minimum. However, in this case, it is logical, and if you want to do it, this story should be what you want, not other people.

Certainly, but it's fun to write a story together with your readers. I really like transformations- but I won't go far with them. I can't think of any TF right now anyway, so...

Cyero: 'K. The bell will just translate to BE, because the bell, unlike Chateau Romani, does not have incredibly strong magical properties.


OK, here's the Anju piece. Unlike with Cremia, I went for really calm and slow-paced here:

'' Unlike Cremia, Anju had a good night?s sleep. After Clock Town had been saved, the Stock Pot Inn became more and more popular, and so they had hired another girl to work in the morning. It was almost twelve ?o clock when she woke up, quite refreshed. She stretched and yawned. Whistling, she changed from her nightgown to her regular clothes; a red shirt and blue dress. Putting on the shirt, she realised it fit a bit tighter than usual. This surprised her, as she was and had always been a slim girl.

?? I haven?t changed any eating habits...??, she said to herself. She shrugged her shoulders and ignored the matter. She found a note from Kafei, saying he would be visiting his mother the Mayor?s Wife. Anju understood- after all, because of the Skull Kid?s curse they?d been seperated for quite some time. She went out of her room to take over the duty of welcoming guests. She walked the short distance from her room to the counter. ?? Good morning!??, she said to her friend. ?? I?ll take things over from you now.??, she cheerfully added.

Her friend nodded, smiled, and walked off. Anju stood there, constantly smiling, and not just for her job- there was no reason not to smile. She and Kafei were married, her job at the Inn was going great and the world had been saved by the boy in green. Suddenly, a man in armour came in. Anju knew he already had a room, but she couldn?t recall his name. ?? Good afternoon, Mr...??, she said. ?? Shiro.??, he said. ?? Ah... sorry, I?m such an airhead.??, said Anju. ?? That?s fine.??, said Shiro, and walked on to the door leading to the hall.

Anju recalled this man had been gone for a long time at one point, and then returned... thanks to the boy in green. The sun shone brightly over Termina, and Anju sighed. It was really warm- and strangely, her shirt seemed to be getting tighter gradually- though it went so slowly she hardly noticed it until she paid attention. She shrugged her shoulders once more, as it was not the time to have one?s head in the clouds. A customer could come in every second. And she had hardly finished this thought, when the door opened.

And there he was: Kafei, her beloved husband. His purplish-blue hair and bright red eyes shone in the sunlight through the open door. They exchanged a kiss. ?? How?s work been up ?til now, Anju???, he asked. ?? Easy.??, she answered. ?? In the past hours, only one person came in, and this particular person already had a room. And, how is your mother???, she asked. ?? She?s quite well, but she?s heard some strange rumours lately.??, Kafei said. She heard it from the leader of the Indigo-Go?s, that Zora Band.

?? What rumours, Kafei???, said Anju, now quite interested. ?? One of their band members was cursed, apparently.??, he said doubtfully. ?? I haven?t heard much more details, but from what I?ve heard the curse was removed- but then lost somewhere. People are being warned for peculiar flashes.??, he said. Anju thought- last night, she thought she?d seen something like a flash. She didn?t want Kafei to worry, so she kept it to herself for that moment. ?? Oh- well, that?s quite odd.??, she said.

?? Well, Anju, I?m going to look into this some more. Have a great day at work!??, he said with a smile. Anju smiled and waved as Kafei walked out and quickly headed for the exit to the Great Bay. ''

[cyero]

Lack of udder would be fine.

Makes me wonder how the effect from a bell would translate... >.>

[cyero]

Shiro <3

I still don't get how replenishing his hearts helped. xP

[Daichi Azure]

bravo, nice job on this latest installment