Jenn & Sarah

Originally Posted by Matsu-sensei

Welcome to the forum, and great first post. It's nice to see fellow artists.

Only minor critiques I'd have to say are that I'm unsure how the muscles are being portrayed around the hips on the left image (it looks like the buns are trying to be emphasized but I don't know if they'd show from a frontal view), and the frame of her face looks slightly jagged in the right image. The ear looks a tad tiny, but that could easily be a style aspect.

Some very good aspects are the intricate details on the tiny wrinkles on the bikini on the left image, the thong is stretched realistically, and the poses are nicely dynamic, not just completely static standing poses.

I just want to try and provide more commentary than "lol nice boobs" or something.

You know, there are other kinds of commentary you can provide other then critique.

If I may criticize you in turn, constantly critiquing the majority of drawings you come across, even when the amount of visual errors in the drawing are very slim, it starts to come off as nitpicking, and that tends to annoy artists fairly quickly. I mean, it wouldn't have been so bad if you didn't just jump right to it. But you didn't even ask about the drawing or the artist. You just jumped right into the critique as if the artist asked it of you. It's like it was some kind of planned business transaction.

I realize what you are trying to do, because yes, "lol nice boobs" gets old quickly. But, let us not overcompensate.