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Join Date: Jun 2007
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Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG
Erm... Maybe you should start with a 5th grade spelling class.
Then check it's consistent, and also check for out of character moments (of which there were plenty) those can kind of ruin a story too. It's just hard to take something seriously with words like "quitted". |
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