Kresh, a Dungeons and Dragons tale (BE and the like to follow)

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See? Now you know how terrible it is to not get comments. ^^;

It's a neat story, but I'm worried the Orc seems a little too Thrall-ish. Too pretty, thinky, and magic-y for an Orc, even a half-orc. If he'd been two out of the tree, it would've been okay, but looks, brains, and brawn all at once? Reeks just a tad of a marty-stu. ^^;