Dungeon & Dragons & Expansion (BE, TF, MB, FMG)

[SoylentOrange]

So, I heard from some readers that they got turned off at Celia's transformation because it was too gory. I was going for real horror for her in her situation, but did I go too far? Did anyone else quit at Celia's TF?

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Originally Posted by SoylentOrange

So, I heard from some readers that they got turned off at Celia's transformation because it was too gory. I was going for real horror for her in her situation, but did I go too far? Did anyone else quit at Celia's TF?

I didn't quit but it was a bit graphic. (Although at least the legs didn't just get spliced off like in spinnerette by krakow comics.)
That and I think spider hybrids (or spiders) of any kind are a bit creepy.

[Vejita00]

Originally Posted by SoylentOrange

So, I heard from some readers that they got turned off at Celia's transformation because it was too gory. I was going for real horror for her in her situation, but did I go too far? Did anyone else quit at Celia's TF?

I didn't read any of it in the mindset of "Ooo, fetishes, let's fap!" So it didn't bother me. I can see how it might ruin someones boner though, if thats why they were reading it.
I think thats a stupid way to go into reading any story though, even fetish ones.