Billie's Wish (Offsite)

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Wow, that was excellent. I would put you right up there with Smooch in terms of sequence quality. I especially like your emphasis on the eyes and face, two areas that I often notice that artists will de-emphasize in favor of BOOBS! and HIPS! please keep it up. Also I'm really enjoying how you manage to make your girls believably, wonderfully understated, yet believably feminine as opposed to the often heavier handed approach of slapping E cup and up breasts on the resulting woman.

What little fault I could pick at would simply be the rather simplistic and cliche things Billy says. I can't count how many times I've seen the "It's gone!" anvil dropped. Given the character I think an implicit statement would be more powerful and less basic maybe something like "Is this a?! Am I a g..g..?!!"