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10-01-2012
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Lurker
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 18
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Re: Layers - Short Story
The story was neat, but I feel that you could have gone into more detail with the tf aspect. it's mostly before/after with a bit in between.
Very well written though. great work =) |
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