Mail Order Bride, A new TG story..

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Originally Posted by Apsm

So he became the woman from the dating site...then where's "Yuki's" date supposed to be?

Also, during part one...



I think that needs to be changed to suggest he's losing stubble instead of gaining it.

And in part 5



Do you mean testicles?

Otherwise, whilst I found the sequence pretty simple, it's a decent enough tg.

Thank you for the feed back. To answer your question. John may have a little surprise if I ever do a part 2.