More general 'increased beauty'

[Ninja Jay]

I just finished reading Sgt Night Walker, and I gotta say, I'm impressed! It really reminded me of klyphlords work! If I had to gripe, though, it would be about some problems with grammar and punctuation! Keep up the good work!

[OHGODBIGBOOBS]

Originally Posted by Ninja Jay

I just finished reading Sgt Night Walker, and I gotta say, I'm impressed! It really reminded me of klyphlords work! If I had to gripe, though, it would be about some problems with grammar and punctuation! Keep up the good work!

Thanks for the feedback Ninja Jay. I know grammar and punctuation are an issue and am already working on it a bit more but they have never been my strong suit.
I wanna do a few more in the future in the same universe:
Private Hoplass (TG, IB);
Corporal Bolton (IB, Futa);
And a few others including one or two prequels .