TG/BE Story: A Friendly Game

[catfish27]

Very nicely described transformation, and I enjoy the "double the effect on him" scenario. In fact, because of that, I would have liked to have seen a clothing transformation -- either early on, or after the sex, where Julie asks Mitch what he'd like to have her wearing, and he winds up in a skimpier/sexier version of the outfit.

Also, does he end up with only one pointed ear at the end? I think Julie should at least leave him with a matching set.

[Zenshuuin]

Originally Posted by catfish27

Very nicely described transformation, and I enjoy the "double the effect on him" scenario. In fact, because of that, I would have liked to have seen a clothing transformation -- either early on, or after the sex, where Julie asks Mitch what he'd like to have her wearing, and he winds up in a skimpier/sexier version of the outfit.

Thanks. Glad you liked it. I don't really see clothing transformation fitting into this story, though. But the other story I have in mind will definitely involve clothing transformation.

Also, does he end up with only one pointed ear at the end? I think Julie should at least leave him with a matching set.

I actually debated how to word that last bit to imply both ears, but I just wasn't happy with how it sounded, so I decided to just leave it open to interpretation whether it affected one ear or both.

Originally Posted by CNash

Awesome story! I'd definitely like to see more "games" in this setting - maybe Julie could find someone who'd turn the tables on her a little? It seems like Julie enjoys being the one "in control" - even though she gives the illusion of control to Mitch, she's still the one driving the scenario.

Well she was caught a little off guard by his last wish, but otherwise yeah, she was more or less in control the whole time. I'll have to consider changing it up a bit if I ever write a sequel.

And thanks for catching the typo. Fixed it.

[Red Parrot]

Fantastic.

Just really, really, perfect.

And although I'd like to see more, I think this was the perfect length. Instead of adding more to this one I'd rather you do sequels and continue on with different adventures of Julie.

And although I think TG fits this character best you've given yourself the ability to do shrinking, animals, or inanimate transformations in the future. Would be fun to see some of those appear occasionally.

Hope to see more, you've got a great eye for detail and describe everything just perfectly!