New TF Story

[Panda_Monk]

Just wanted to say I really enjoyed this story and would love for you to continue it. I really enjoyed how you developed the relationship between Mary and the The Body. With her having to come up with explanations, for not eating everything, that it can actually understand within its somewhat limited experiences. This story is one of the few I've found in the genre that is actually a story with conflict, characters and antagonists rather than a list of cool things happening to someone one after another. I would really love to see this continued as I feel it was just starting to reach a head after Mary's attack on the cops.

As a side note I was wondering how Mary, Sandra and Katie have gone so long without more contact from the cops or government since her attack seemed to be pretty high profile news.

[ManicMoonMan]

I've been following along with the story on DevArt, and just found my way here. It was great to get so much more of it at once, but it's also saddening to see it on the backburner. Love the story, love the characters, love the exotic transformations.

[SoylentOrange]

Originally Posted by Panda_Monk

As a side note I was wondering how Mary, Sandra and Katie have gone so long without more contact from the cops or government since her attack seemed to be pretty high profile news.

It's been less than a day in-story since the police, and you have to remember they all saw Mary's Slasher form get its head ventilated and then get back up. At the point where Lethal Force means nothing, the equation of risk/reward gets skewed very far in the "Pull back" direction. I'm sure there will be more contact, but you have to remember, officer safety is most department's #1 priority. At the point where the report is "We shot it and it didn't do anything" their orders are probably going to be "get away from it".

[lordaltros]

Originally Posted by SoylentOrange

It's been less than a day in-story since the police, and you have to remember they all saw Mary's Slasher form get its head ventilated and then get back up. At the point where Lethal Force means nothing, the equation of risk/reward gets skewed very far in the "Pull back" direction. I'm sure there will be more contact, but you have to remember, officer safety is most department's #1 priority. At the point where the report is "We shot it and it didn't do anything" their orders are probably going to be "get away from it".

wai- wowit-wha?!
when did this happen?!
i've only seen up to part 10 on DA.

just found this thread here today.

by the way, great story.
one of the very few i've actually been following.

[lordaltros]

ooooh ok.
i see now.
wow. i got a lot of catching up to do!

[lordaltros]

ACK!
now i'm all caught up.
dang it.

ok.
so what can be done to help you along with this?
i'd be willing to do what i can (if i can).

[GenYun]

..who are you talking to?

[lordaltros]

apparently the crack in the wall.
i thought i saw it blinking at me and wanted to test its levels of sentience.
so far it has returned nothing back.
but i refuse to give up hope.

[GenYun]

Well can you not necro threads by having conversations with yourself? I was actually expecting meaningful content.

[lordaltros]

but i wasn't talking to myself. i was talking to a crack in the wall.

[SoylentOrange]

Here's some meaningful content, sorry. ^^;

I really do want to get back to this ASAP, but life's just been against it and when I do have the time, i seem to find mysee3lf drawn to Sid and the Girls or Working Girl. I promise for all the neglect that I haven't abandoned the story, though.

[lordaltros]

"wow! gee thanks!
I definitely needed that extra hole in my head."

awesome pic

didn't think you abandoned it at all