Hard Impact

cherokee_nation · 03-04-2015

Just a heads up: she's writing another in response to the second story I wrote her. I don't know if it's a continuation of this one, or something different. All I know is that it's gonna be hot.

Mr Wayne · 03-04-2015

Cherokee_Nation,

Not bad. A bit light on the clothes rippage, but a very smooth pace, nice detail with references to her slow size increase, not too short in length overall, not too big in final size of the mystery woman, nice detail with the sexual references, and well written too. Seems this Polyphema has written more than a few stories. Pass along my regards, if you would please.

03-04-2015	#1
cherokee_nation Thom Didamus Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: The Midwestern United States Posts: 56	Re: Hard Impact Just a heads up: she's writing another in response to the second story I wrote her. I don't know if it's a continuation of this one, or something different. All I know is that it's gonna be hot. __________________ "We all have inner demons. Some of us just have outer ones as well." "This is wrong. I can't imagne in any way how this is going to be right..." -- Wolfman Al

03-04-2015	#2
Mr Wayne The Man~the Myth~the Bat Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Gotham Posts: 738	Re: Hard Impact Cherokee_Nation, Not bad. A bit light on the clothes rippage, but a very smooth pace, nice detail with references to her slow size increase, not too short in length overall, not too big in final size of the mystery woman, nice detail with the sexual references, and well written too. Seems this Polyphema has written more than a few stories. Pass along my regards, if you would please. __________________ The night is darkest just before the dawn... kArMa XD

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