Tell me a story! (Comic)

[Prof_Sai]

I don't really need a premise. What is killing me is the written execution. I need a path with a conclusion. All my ideas spiral on forever into a void.

[Blake Isaac Gordon]

Originally Posted by Prof_Sai

I don't really need a premise. What is killing me is the written execution. I need a path with a conclusion. All my ideas spiral on forever into a void.

Huh?
That problem can be controlled if you plan out your end scene and nail it.

Now if you are like me and you have a hard time killing your babies try asking these questions:

1. What is the purpose of the scene?
2. Does the scene drive the story forward?
3. Is there a a bunch of 'info dump' without much else within the scene?
4. Will your main character(s) (let alone readers) remember the scene 10 pages into the story?

Me~ I'm super guilty of wanting and trying to explain everything.

If your stories are nothing more than a long chain of transformation scenes I'd say collect the best ones and turn them into comic scripts.

But if you are trying to write something more than just a 10 page BE comic, I hope these 'suggestions' help.

All I see now are (BE)comics, (GTS)comics, (FMG)comics... over and over again.

Its nice to see people talking about writing.

[queenofprussia2006]

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[whyamihere]

Originally Posted by Prof_Sai

I don't really need a premise. What is killing me is the written execution. I need a path with a conclusion. All my ideas spiral on forever into a void.

It ends with a happy ending of her getting a nice doll house.
Or what most people do, death by vore -_-

[CyberFox]

The shrunk woman needs to experience life at (insert size we're dealing with)

I'm thinking
- feeling the texture of the clothes she shrank out of between her toes and by rubbing it on her cheek
- doing a one girl rodeo with a few mice and using a rat for bronco busting
- anything else