Devolution

[Sunstrider]

I reached a "how the hell do i go from here" point when writing that particular branch, so i dunno. Probable anything about it would come off as repetitive, and there's a certain number of times before "Corine devolving and turning more women into cavepeople" gets boring.

However, one of my little projects involves writing a standalone version of the Devolution Revolution story. Although i don't know if i should upload it or not, out of respect for the many writers that have added to the original story on the site.

[Randy_McSporran]

Originally Posted by Sunstrider

I reached a "how the hell do i go from here" point when writing that particular branch, so i dunno. Probable anything about it would come off as repetitive, and there's a certain number of times before "Corine devolving and turning more women into cavepeople" gets boring.

However, one of my little projects involves writing a standalone version of the Devolution Revolution story. Although i don't know if i should upload it or not, out of respect for the many writers that have added to the original story on the site.

I would love to see this. And thanks for your Jurassic World story!

[Harlock27]

Originally Posted by Sunstrider

I reached a "how the hell do i go from here" point when writing that particular branch, so i dunno. Probable anything about it would come off as repetitive, and there's a certain number of times before "Corine devolving and turning more women into cavepeople" gets boring.

However, one of my little projects involves writing a standalone version of the Devolution Revolution story. Although i don't know if i should upload it or not, out of respect for the many writers that have added to the original story on the site.

Understood. Thanks for the response. For the record, I do love your devolution writing; it's top notch.

[Sunstrider]

Originally Posted by Harlock27

Understood. Thanks for the response. For the record, I do love your devolution writing; it's top notch.

I tried to give it a go, but it's the best i could come up with.
I'm trying to stay away from the Addventure lately, because i like stories with a ton of fluff, and it's kind of a letdown when someone adds to a branch and its just "bam, quick TF". I feel like you have to build up the setting, or things rapidly become as chaotic and repetitive as a zombie movie.

http://old.bearchive.com/~addventure.../1134808.html?

I wrote a bunch of savage/mental degradation on Superstories.net during the last year, just search for the She-Hulk Going Native story. Perhaps you might like that.

Originally Posted by Randy_McSporran

I would love to see this. And thanks for your Jurassic World story!

It's a funny thing, actually.
I saved all the episodes from the Devolution Revolution addventure branch around early 2016, but i ended up re-writing and adding to them until it was an entirely different thing, a story that looks like the lovechild of a zombie apocalypse flick and that Sound of Thunder movie (i.e.: a bunch of people trying to survive as everything and everyone around them devolve).

It's a little project i've been doing as a writing exercise (to polish my english, because it's not my native language) on what little free time i have.
It kind of stops being a fetish-y thing and then jumps into a straight fiction novel not unlike that horrible Devolution comic Dynamite published in 2016 (except with a little bit less social commentary).

Anyway, someone asked me at FA for the shopped picture at the end of the Jurassic World story. So, i'll put it here since i don't know FA's policy on photoshopped pictures.

[Mazoku]

Here's a clip from a comedy/horror tv show called Garth Marenghi's Darkplace; episode 4, "The Apes of Wrath" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVeUyzyNRjY , woman devolves a minute or so in.

[zokk]

This clip has been around...