AP animation

[chriskim019]

Wow, that was pretty good. The idea wasn't bad, and it even had sounds. It would be wonderful for you to do more animations of this kind in the future, and I will be there to buy them

[ZodiacX]

Ive bought most everything you've made the past couple years, but this one.... Leave me feeling rather disappointed. A lot more time on the transition would have been better, and the random cartoon sound effects and..... clown make it feel really silly. A good first attempt, but rather amateurish for $5...
I like everything else you've published, but I feel a little ripped off this time.... Sorry.

[Katsumend]

Could've been better for sure, but I wasn't horribly disappointed. Would be interested to see how well this sells.

[Locofuria]

Originally Posted by ZodiacX

Ive bought most everything you've made the past couple years, but this one.... Leave me feeling rather disappointed. A lot more time on the transition would have been better, and the random cartoon sound effects and..... clown make it feel really silly. A good first attempt, but rather amateurish for $5...
I like everything else you've published, but I feel a little ripped off this time.... Sorry.

It is my first time with a comission in animation...probably it is a pilot....remember the story is short and the artist is amateur in transformations....for my part i like the process and the next will be with a slow process....

[chriskim019]

Originally Posted by Locofuria

It is my first time with a comission in animation...probably it is a pilot....remember the story is short and the artist is amateur in transformations....for my part i like the process and the next will be with a slow process....

For the next one, you should also try including sequences of face maturing, shoulder widening, and vagina expanding. They are also some good criterias of AP other than Breast expansion, Butt expansion, Hand growth, Foot growth, Leg growth, and Hair growth.

[Locofuria]

Originally Posted by chriskim019

For the next one, you should also try including sequences of face maturing, shoulder widening, and vagina expanding. They are also some good criterias of AP other than Breast expansion, Butt expansion, Hand growth, Foot growth, Leg growth, and Hair growth.

OK, thanks for the critiques