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[JJStrebas]

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[JJStrebas]

Thank you for that. I am almost done with part six which includes the next chapter of The Supermarket and The Condition. I may also include another The Familiar chapter if I have time.

My other concern is pacing. I don't want to rush things by having the women get too big too fast but I want to keep things interesting. My main focus is BE but I also like to hint at and touch on other kinks as well from time to time. As far as that goes and along with other story elements like mystery, intrigue, violence or tragedy...what do you readers think could/should be added to make for an interesting story element you would like to see?

[Darkstorm]

Originally Posted by JJStrebas

My main focus is BE but I also like to hint at and touch on other kinks as well from time to time. As far as that goes and along with other story elements like mystery, intrigue, violence or tragedy...what do you readers think could/should be added to make for an interesting story element you would like to see?

Another great entry, thank you. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I appreciated the hints at more voluptuous options for future installments of The Supermarket; while BE is my main kink, I thoroughly enjoy short, soft, voluptuous body types, so mild weight gain and even slight female shrinking would be very welcome additions!

It would certainly allow for more points to be spread, and upping her curvaceousness would help with those harder to find larger bra sizes. Of course being shorter also helps magnify the scale of curves, as Bridgette so admirably demonstrates

And we still haven't seen how the points are earned, or how often. Mystery!

[JJStrebas]

Ok so Amazon is having some issues and volume six is hung up in server limbo. I decided just to do two long installments of The Supermarket and The Condition.

When it goes live I'll come back and post a link.

[JJStrebas]

Finally up.
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B076QJFTVD

[JJStrebas]

When I started doing this gig a year ago, I really didn't know how important a good cover was. But now I realize it does make a huge difference. I hope to keep getting better and make some of the really slick covers I see out there that would cost hundreds to pay a professional to produce.
But for now, my amateur morphs of stock photos will have to do.

I had a few left over from a bundle of images I bought a while back and decided to go back and redo some covers I wasn't very proud of. As always, the images are random and the models depicted have nothing to do with the story. <cough, cough> My friend thinks this one is Gloria after her first few sessions with the machine in The Supermarket.

[JJStrebas]

Okay. I am going to work hard to get 7 out sooner rather than later and have it include the next chapters of The Supermarket, The Condition and The Familiar as those seem to be the most popular stories.

Thank you all for the purchases and Kindle Unlimited reads.

[JJStrebas]

I am glad you liked it. I am also glad you picked up on some subtle plot points that I wanted to establish without beating the readers over the head with them. I want to create some tension with this story and show what the characters would be willing to do in order to get more points that would surprise the reader and not necessairily be what you would expect...starting with Radhi giving a couple away to Gloria as being an act that you wouldn't see coming. Some more suprises are on the way.

[Darkstorm]

Originally Posted by JJStrebas

...glad you picked up on some subtle plot points that I wanted to establish without beating the readers over the head with them. I want to create some tension with this story and show what the characters would be willing to do in order to get more points that would surprise the reader and not necessairily be what you would expect...starting with Radhi giving a couple away to Gloria as being an act that you wouldn't see coming. Some more suprises are on the way.

Yes, it does make you wonder at the motivation behind point donations, whether there is some sort of point bonus to assisting fellow employees...

It will be interesting to see how long it takes to earn points, and what actions earn them. Does simply doing a good job accumulate points? or is it random? or maybe it requires them to go perform duties above and beyond their assigned positions? I wonder if perhaps there might also be opt-in staff surveys that give bonus points for participation; or by participating, enters the employee in a prize draw to win points... interesting...

I'll certainly be keeping an eye out for chapter 7!

And what's up with The Condition? that cold hard look she gave... is the condition supernatural in origin? possession? succubi ancestry?

[JJStrebas]

All of those point earning scenarios are good guesses and reasonable possibilities. Radhi's motives may not be so clear but I do think she will establish herself as a clear atagonist so I don't think her "generosity" is that at all. She has a strategy, but the trouble is she can't control everyone else - particularly the other managers/dept heads.

Elena (The Condition) can be scary sometimes, can't she? It is almost like something sinister is growing inside her much like her bust is. Remember she also mentiones that while her mother and brother and aunt have the same condition, she was the only one that had big boobs or strong teeth. I wonder why that is? Maybe one day Randall will get to talk to someone who knows more about her.

Incidentally and mostly unrelated, I have weaved in a few easter eggs to tie the stories in togerher to imply that they take place in the same universe but it doesnt necessarily mean any of the characters are related or have crossed paths in any way shape or form...yet

[JJStrebas]

Volume 7 is out.

www.amazon.com/dp/B0776Z4N28

[Darkstorm]

Originally Posted by JJStrebas

Volume 7 is out.

https://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B0776...elL&ref=plSrch

Interesting. Lots of exposition this time for The Supermarket - sounds as though Jess / Gloria / Travis are in for some brainstorming with those screen photos next chapter.
A combination of height loss and upping the H/W ratio would be an intriguing way to fill out her curves with just a few points, which leaves many more available for boobs... plus she would be on more equal footing with Jess in terms of height

And who knows how many other training courses she needs to complete? here's hoping that new stores get a Nugenicorp machine too, and that the changes are permanent!

As for The Condition, I hope that nothing sinister has happened to Sasha.... boy Elena is possessive!