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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
I appreciate all your posts. This one is especially valuable because it echoes some of the same thoughts I have been having about that thread as well as gives me confidence to keep going and new themes to explore. I had a little case of burnout to get over and it hit me right in the middle of writing KBTG as i had originally envisioned it as just another serialized chapter by chapter installment of The Cleavage Accounts. But I wanted to make it a standalone long form short or novlette/novella instead. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I am about 70% done with my next story. It is a bit of a departure from the stories I have written so far, radical for me, but old hat for everybody else because as we all know there's nothing new under the sun in anything but with BE or any writing it is just how the author puts their personal spin on it, and I hope to do just that. I don't want to talk more about it because it isn't finished and I hope to get it out within the next few days if possible. But I hope it scratches the Unlikely/reluctant/noncon BE protagonist itch.
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
Okay, I present to you "Bosom Destiny."
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B078X3S2LY Elizabeth leads a normal, average life until she becomes the sole heir to her eccentric Great Aunt Eunice's estate. But in order to receive the multi-million dollar windfall she has to live alone on the property for six months and is only allowed a limited amount of time off the property requiring the use of an ankle bracelet. As she quits her job and says goodbye to her family and friends and moves in, she realizes there is more than meets the eye to the house, and the land. She is not alone, and the house has a life of its own but it is the affects of merely living in the residence that soon manifest in her changing, growing bust line. At first she welcomes the growth, but too much happens too fast and she is faced with a dire dilemma. Her growing bust is not just a random side effect, but part of a grander plan that has society level implications. I tried to step a little out of my comfort zone. This does contain elements of absorption "vore." Which don't get me wrong, it isnt what you think. Someone who is heavy into vore (oral or contact) will probably call my version of it not true vore and I am fine with that. I just think if you find the idea a turnoff, still give the story a chance because it isn't quite the same method as some of the stories and comics I have seen which are very gory. This story is NOT gory. I wanted to capture what a woman who isn't excited about nor asked for a huge chest or continued growth might go through. ![]()
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Some intriguing ideas in the new novel. I liked the time/dimensional intervention aspect of her inheritance - it incites Elizabeth to think beyond her own physical changes and see how they might be for the greater good. Tie-ins with other material in your expanded novel-verse, such as The Corset (and Nugenicorp) was also a nice touch. The scene with the plane was lovely, and seemed to do much in the way of helping Elizabeth accept herself and her fate.
I too, find attribute theft to be completely anathema when it comes to BE stories, and find it terribly off-putting, even when only used once or twice; I have to admit being disappointed she didn't find the girl from the diner and help return her to normal. That's just me though, I'm sure there are fans who love stories featuring that. I'm not sure if I noticed a slight continuity issue at the start of the epilogue - she reaches pavement and a dead-end in the road and screeches to a halt, whilst traveling in the ATV. The next paragraph I wasn't quite sure about "I had a feeling about one of the doors and grabbed the latch. It opened, and I walked into the empty office building." Is this referring to the door of the ATV? I read it as though it was, but I had to go back and re-read the sentence to make sure I hadn't skipped something (and google RZR ATV's to have a look if they had doors ![]() A very interesting read, thankyou |
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
Finally up. This took me longer than expected because I caught the flu and was down for about a week. Please enjoy the next exciting installment in the world of your favorite Supermarket, Merchant Pat's!
If you are new to my writing please be aware that this is a continuing saga that began in The Cleavage Accounts 5-10. https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0798Q4TLF ![]()
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I fully admit that futa is not really my thing, so I may leave off any commentary on Compatible Extremes until I've given myself enough time to give it a thorough read. The Supermarket however... so many little twists this chapter. Heather now queen of the roost - I somehow see her "owing" Gloria to have more significance later. Kianna really likes to shake up the pecking order; very motivational management style. Some very nice descriptive passages of Heather and Jessica's expansion. I found the amplifying effects of the "generic" Nugenicorp supplements on the Supermarket meals quite intriguing, as well as their cumulative effects on their own (Jessica's weight gain from over-indulgence was lovely). I can see Gloria using this to her advantage when she plans out her growth. Bridgette too most likely ![]() I'm hoping Gloria doesn't up her height (in fact I hope she goes the opposite, but then again, short girls are my thing ![]() And of course, the mysterious phone call... nice cliff-hanger. I did notice the number ended with 001 - is it designated to individual Nugenicorp projects, or to their operatives? perhaps to individuals of interest? hmmm... I can see a number of sliders opening and points given in Gloria's near future (I did also note Denae and Cindi's intriguing discussion - I wonder if Gloria will get access to firmness/buoyancy or other interesting combinations? limitless possibilities there!) Another excellent chapter - thank-you for your hard work, particularly when under the weather. Looking forward to more! |
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
Okay, so I promised myself when I started doing this that I would force myself to write outside my comfort zone occasionally to hone my skills.
Bosom Destiny was the first of those efforts and thanks to all of you it is already on track to being my most popular story. So with that said, my next two efforts will deal with subject matter that may not be popular with many of you and I totally understand. Just please hang in there with me and I will continue to produce more traditional offerings as i go on. The first of these outside the lines titles is called Compatible Extremes. It involves a FUTA. https://www.amazon.com/dp/B079DLNVB2 Callie is the most beautiful woman around. She knows this to be true, it isn't bravado or delusion. She is the subject of an on-going effort by a pharmaceutical giant that has wreaked havoc with her social life and turned her into a collection of superlatives. She has an incredible body and an unknowable beauty that allows her to have any man she wants. The only problem is, her insatiable hunger for sex and fulfillment has left her unable to be satisfied by any man. Distraught, depressed and devastated - she believes she will never find someone to really love if she can never gain true satisfaction. As the forces in her body reach their peak, she ponders what her future holds. Then she meets Risana. Her world is turned upside down as she struggles to understand how a woman with more physical beauty then her could even exist. She wants to know everything about her, what her background is. Was she too part of the pharmaceutical trial? What she uncovers is a tremendous secret that Risana is hiding that she never could have foreseen. This is an erotic story about a straight woman meeting and falling in love with a Futanari. It includes breast expansion. There is female/futa intercourse. ![]()
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
I'm definitely a futanari lover so I'll give it a read. Expansion mixed with futa always seems to be a good combo to me but, I know not everyone here is into that kinda thing. It is what it is though,
I'll try to give you some feedback whenever I finish it.
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
Thank you. I hope you enjoy it.
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Okay, so my next book is kinda big.
It is also a bit of a step outside the norm. I promise that my next few works will be more traditional after this one, it is just something I've wanted to write for a while I've been working on it off and on for a long time and it eventually grew into a novella, so I have to ask a bit more for it since it is so long. Anyway, i'll post the blurb with a link later because Amazon will be chewing on it for a while since it is so big, probably wont go live until long after ive gone to bed. Anyway, let me explain why this is untraditional. This is my take on a team of superheroes with all busty women, so more like Hulk and the Agents of S.M.A.S.H. as opposed to the Avengers since they all have similar abilities based on one thing: Giant boobs. These are mini giantesses. They have what I would call huge to massive breasts and they grow very fast. There's no slow incremental growth drawn out over a period of time and no angst about it all. (Well, some but not in the traditional sense) As far as the giantess portion, they range from mid six footers to over eight feet tall, but none of the traditional giantess themes of stomping on tiny men or insertion. There is crushing, quite a bit of it, but for a postive cause, but also for sexual domination (but with no one actually getting hurt) It is has a science fiction action slant, so the setting and the action are upfront and the process scenes are few and spread out as are the sex scenes.
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
It is called Gaia Ambition.
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B079KPTTC2 Lori Wells is an engineer living an average life in an average city. Her life is turned upside down and inside out when she discovers that her world is in danger as is the entire Galaxy from an overwhelming evil force bent on exterminating the human race. Her father's disappearance leads her and her fiance on a trip halfway across the Milky Way to discover that we are indeed not alone and that Lori will play a pivotal role in saving all of Mankind. To do so she will become a powerful force known as a Gaia, a powerful, strong and nigh invincible woman with great strength, speed, agility and power emanating from her beautiful, busty body. She will have help in the form of other Gaias who have specialized roles, but will they be enough, or is it already too late? ![]()
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