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Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: anti-kannadah
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Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda)
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Perverted Skeleton
Join Date: May 2006
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Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda)
Interesting concept...although
1. I think there should be more physical discrepencies between Nami, Luffy, and the final product. 2. Brook hasn't shown up in here yet...does this story take place before Thriller Bark? Last edited by Cukeman; 03-04-2008 at 07:15 PM. |
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 371
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Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda)
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![]() And as much as I love a singing skeleton... there hasnt been enough of him yet for me to incorporate him. And thank you for the comments. Im no artist so I cant draw what I see in my head.. so I "borrow" pictures I find around. If I get any ideas I will continue... |
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self proclaimed genious
Join Date: Oct 2006
Posts: 257
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Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda)
this is good....
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Lurker
Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 371
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Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda)
Minor update in the first post. Maybe once some of the art gets finished I will continue the story? Also.. I might take a stab at drawing some of the scenes and then maybe asking my friend to re-do em lol. Tell me what you think.
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Black_Dragon
Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 104
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Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda)
this story is great (mao style of clapping) hope you put up the rest soon.
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Black_Dragon
Join Date: Dec 2006
Posts: 104
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Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda)
We all agree the story is good
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Lurker
Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 371
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Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda)
I posted chapter 1.1, a remake of chapter one... going to do a remake of chapter 2 soon.
The main reason im remaking them is so I can actually remember where I was going. Also... I added Brooke into chapter 1. I hope I did it right! |
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 371
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Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda)
Added Chapter 2.1 and a failed request from bnui-ransder on deviantART.
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Lurker
Join Date: Sep 2007
Posts: 371
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Re: One Piece story idea...(TG kinda)
Sorry for the triple post, but chapter 3 is up...
It is a bit lackluster compared to the first 2 but... its building up to something, though I dont know what!! As you can see... a little bit of Nami is going to show, but it will be mostly Luffy. Ah and I thought of a cheesy name for this, its in the first post. |
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