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02-27-2009
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Knight Of The Black Sword
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: In the forgotten era of man...
Posts: 418
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Re: Story: My Lovely Sylvia (slow shrink, gentle, 18+)
I loved the story, how the girl tried to usher herself out of growing smaller, but kept falling deeper in love with him, & him her. Wish I could find a girl that was that crazy.
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03-04-2009
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Mad Scientist
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Upstate NY
Posts: 371
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Re: Story: My Lovely Sylvia (slow shrink, gentle, 18+)
GREAT story! Flawless description and story pacing!
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03-27-2009
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Lurker
Join Date: Sep 2008
Posts: 10
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Re: Story: My Lovely Sylvia (slow shrink, gentle, 18+)
Good writing indeed. I liked how true to form the characters stayed throughout, and each chapter seemed to end in just the right place. I dare say you have some flair for this.
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06-08-2009
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Dapper
Join Date: Apr 2009
Posts: 80
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Re: Story: My Lovely Sylvia (slow shrink, gentle, 18+)
It was well thought out, grammatically sound, spell-check approved, and above all well-written. Very good sir, I hope and eagerly await a sequel.
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