The "Official" TG Caption Thread

[Icanseestuffandstuff]

This one was intentionally made to be a shorter story, turned out as long as the usual ones. I feel this one is a bit more touching, however, which is what some stories do lack. I get a bit tired, and sometimes just bored out of my mind, when folks use the 'complete mind wipe' technique to solve everything. Here I leave a sort of 'its what you decide' ending while making the story itself a bit... well cute in my opinion. Possibly to match the image, in a way.

Comments, compliments, suggestions are welcome, of course. In fact greatly appreciated.

[Katt]

Is there anyway we could see less walls of text? More line breaks?

[Icanseestuffandstuff]

Originally Posted by Katt

Is there anyway we could see less walls of text? More line breaks?

Yes there is, and there was one in there but I cut it out while formatting and never got to putting it back in. Sorry. Anything else?

[Darklyte]

In general, I prefer captions to put the focus on the image, not the story. I feel they should be a couple short, imaginative lines describing the events of the picture and immediately before it, but not an entire story. Most of the captions in this thread seem to be the reverse: An entire long wall of text with an attached image.

But honestly, you don't have to listen to me. I'm just a lurker.

[Katt]

Indeed, Icanseestuff... you do good work you just need to work on your formatting, getting a good pic to text ratio, even if that means ditching the smaller sized images.

Here's a few examples, some of my favorites I received when I used to hang out at Rachel's Haven.

[Intox]

Originally Posted by Katt

Here's a few examples, some of my favorites I received when I used to hang out at Rachel's Haven.

Wait, are those all requests from/for one person?

Or are there still people that use a single "victim name" for the guy in like every caption?

[Katt]

Originally Posted by Intox

Wait, are those all requests from/for one person?

Or are there still people that use a single "victim name" for the guy in like every caption?

The way the haven works is basically trading captions... so they did one for me and I did one for them, etc.

[Intox]

Originally Posted by Katt

The way the haven works is basically trading captions... so they did one for me and I did one for them, etc.

Oh, I see.

I liked some of the captions from the old groups but then they got their own domain and...yeah, no.

[Icanseestuffandstuff]

Alright, tried another one. This one has a bigger picture to help compensate for the usual wall of text. Not saying that fixes things, but hopefully you can enjoy the story a bit more that way. Also there are splits, so it's a much easier wall of text to soak in.

EDIT: Continuing to work for the better of progress, comments are still appreciated. Although I probably just gave Darklyte a heart attack with this enormous text attack.

[Icanseestuffandstuff]

Originally Posted by Icanseestuffandstuff

Alright, tried another one. This one has a bigger picture to help compensate for the usual wall of text. Not saying that fixes things, but hopefully you can enjoy the story a bit more that way. Also there are splits, so it's a much easier wall of text to soak in.

EDIT: Continuing to work for the better of progress, comments are still appreciated. Although I probably just gave Darklyte a heart attack with this enormous text attack.

I decided to continue one of my captions with a follow up, to keep the creativity flowing in a way. Although at this point the TG is done, you get to see the character aftermath. I thought I'd make a little bit of a humorous ending to the story. Posted on the comment I have quoted.

[Icanseestuffandstuff]

Came to me out of nowhere. I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it. I tried to take up a new approach here.

[The-Pro]

I still find the no NC-17 rule bizarre.