The Queen of Kings *New Comic* :D

[LOD]

Yeah Jit gets the proceeds anyways, and pay pal is a nice touch, watch out though dear, if they catch wind you are selling prawns they'll can your account.

[Jitensha]

I read the fine print, you can only get in trouble if you're knowingly selling to minors. Since this is automated, and I advertise this is 'adult' work, a minor would be buying at their own risk, and I wouldn't knowingly be selling to them. I've talked to other artist who sell online with paypal, especially those selling with E-junkie, and they verified this 'loophole' if you'd call it one. I've even spoken with Paypal when I first started my store back in January talking about a sale gone wrong. I noted that I was selling adult comics for download. Anywho, got the word from LK, he said he'd upload tomorrow

[Captain Ash]

It's good to see a medical story again.
This is a nice change and a change for a lot of shrinking mischief.
The artwork is great and I loved Alys shrinking into her clothes sequence.
Alys reaction as a tiny woman was priceless.

Since the story "The borrower" we know that Jitensha can also write great stories.
However, I would have seen more of the story around Alys.
The focus of the comic is mainly based on Gwen.
Instead I would like to have more of the story, like what Gavin would do with Gwen in the end.

The ones who like the kind of sex in Jitensha's stories will still love this one.
But the one cannibalism scene felt somehow unnecessary and make no sense to me at all.

The Queen of Kings is a fine piece of art, although due to the promising title and medieval theme, I hoped of a little bit more story in this one.

Captain Ash

[Jitensha]

Glad you liked it Ash! I don't know what you mean by medical, but thanks
I left some open at the end in case others would be interested in a sequel (^^)
And it's a short, light vore scene, I think it's a bit harsh when you call it 'cannibalism'. When I think of cannibalism, I think of gore and guts, this was the complete opposite (>_<); It was very mild, and more so implied, since you didn't see the girl going down, or any 'inside' views. I think mouthplay in my other comics was a bit more 'intense' then this comic. I'm not trying to say you're wrong or anything, I'm just trying to clarify a bit of the scene so there is no confusion.

[Captain Ash]

I wrote medical and I meant it. :P
Since I'm not having much to do with the vore fetish, it is for me cannibalism when one (tiny) human being lands into another human beings belly (that's why I didn't had the word vore in my mind.).
Nothing against mouth plays, there the victim can get out of it alive.
I agree that it is mild so don't worry about bad dreams after reading this comic, but I still felt sorry for this little one.

I'm sure that there will be a sequel.
Place your bets

Captain Ash

[Jitensha]

Thanks Captain