Request a Story - Page 4

splinterfox · 06-20-2011

Well if your still open to ideas... Well I've tried to write this out a few times. But I personally hate my stories so I scrap it every time.

so my idea goes like this:
A girl starts having fever dreams, and blacking out at 10 pm or so every night. she awakes to find her room in dismay every morning(doesnt go noticed by others since she lives alone). But finds that after each morning she is changed little by little into a wolf. The whole story takes place over thirty days or so, and i had originally wrote in a boyfriend to anchor her emotions and to provide a means of support. i was aiming my story to be serious emotional story with little to no sex, but i simply can't do that at my level of writing. Maybe I'll get to it one day. But I'd like to see you take it on, and if you do decide to take it up, feel free to alter the idea in any way, I'd love to see what you could do with it.

Ladylike255 · 06-20-2011

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Just going to head you off at the pass and say no. I'm not comfortable writing a story involving a child.

Oh no! You are not getting me off your boat this easily! I have another idea and it doesn't involve children!

TF-Viewer · 06-20-2011

I have been sitting on an idea for a while. Was going to try and write it myself but I have to admit I suck at writing. So I guess I'll put it out here and see if you want to take it up later.

The setting would be in a museum. We have a smart, sexy female tour guide showing a group of children around the exhibits (they're on a school trip). One of the exhibits has taxidermy wolves on display and the children being children climb onto the display (that was just behind a velvet rope instead of in a glass case) and knock one of the wolves over. The tour guide sees this happening and manages to catch the taxidermy wolf in mid fall and cuts her hand on one of it's fangs. Not badly but enough to break the skin and shed a few drops of blood. The children are escorted out by their teacher (who's very disappointed with them) and the tour guide goes about her duties of straightening up the display.

Skipping ahead a few hours. It's closing time and our guide is closing down the displays for the night when she wanders into one of the science exhibits that happens to contain a rare moon rock. As part of the display they have an artificial sun lamp that shines on the rock to simulate moonlight as it's reflected off the tiny piece of actual moon that they have. As she approaches it to turn off the light she starts to feel warm and sweaty, she never manages to reach the light switch as she suddenly begins to transform. It starts with where she cut herself on the wolf's fang earlier that day, fur sprouting around the cut as the cut begins to heal itself rapidly. Nails turn to claws, hand stretching etc. She tears her clothes off to relieve the heat and because they're becoming too tight. She is overcome by the transformation, but not before realizing what happened. She knows it's absurd but the wolf on display must have been a werewolf and cutting her hand on it's fang was the same as being bitten by one. Now standing in the light of the small moon rock she knows she's a werewolf herself now, but she also knows that it's not actually a full moon outside, and that only the moon rock is causing it. Desperately she tries to reach for the light switch but finds she's transformed too much, she's forced to all fours and can no longer reach it. It dawns on her that there's another way to stop the change. Another one of the science exhibits has a huge sun on display, it's fake of course, but it simulates real sun light and if simulated moon light is causing her to change than simulated sun light could change her back.

So she drags her changing body out of the lunar exhibit towards the solar exhibit, she reaches it just as her head and mind begin to fully change and the transformation quickly reverses itself. Now she's there naked and drenched in sweat on the floor of the museum, gets up after a while and shuts off the power to the lunar exhibit from a fuse box outside the room. She has to do that so she can go inside and retrieve her cell phone from among her destroyed and discarded clothing without transforming again from the fake moonlight. After getting her phone she calls her female roommate to come to the museum and bring some extra clothes for her, there wasn't time to explain on the phone and insists that she hurry before the night security guards find her.

Her friend shows up, gives our now naked guide the spare clothes and they drive home where all is explained (but probably not believed). She also mentions they should buy a cage or some chains because the real full moon was next week.

LostHopeOfDusk · 06-20-2011

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Sorry, I'm afraid I'm going to say no to this one... The idea itself is solid, but it clashes a bit with what I really enjoy writing, which is the mind of the girl either changing into or being replaced by the more feral mind of a beast. But I was really on the fence about this one- approaching the transformation in that moral light would be a really interesting challenge- so... Hm. I'm going to take a look at it again after I finish my next request, and see if I feel differently. Sorry to leave you hanging like that, I really do apologize.

Well, if you take the "feral mind of a beast" as simply doing what you want to do when you want to do it, it could work with my idea. The general idea is that she creates that personality as an excuse, something of a Miss Hyde persona, only wolf like, but all that time, she could have stooped herself if she really wanted too. She just took being a werewolf as the perfect excuse.

Cursebearer · 06-20-2011

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Oh no! You are not getting me off your boat this easily! I have another idea and it doesn't involve children!

Feel free to PM it to me if you'd be more comfortable requesting it that way!

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This idea sounds nice and solid, as I've come to expect from you! I've been hoping to get a request that will let me illustrate a reversion. Now, did you have any further specifics as to what you'd like the woman to look like or how you'd like the transformation to go down and etc. etc? This sounds like one I'll definitely accept.

TF-Viewer · 06-20-2011

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This idea sounds nice and solid, as I've come to expect from you! I've been hoping to get a request that will let me illustrate a reversion. Now, did you have any further specifics as to what you'd like the woman to look like or how you'd like the transformation to go down and etc. etc? This sounds like one I'll definitely accept.

I'll get back to you on that later, you certainly have enough stories to work on in the meantime. No rush.

TF-Viewer · 06-21-2011

Hmm, well as for that last request's details. I think I'd like the tour guide to be Asian and slender framed, a bit of a switch from the usual large chested girls. Let's have this one on the petite side with a relatively small chest. But don't worry, that just means her small clothes will be easier to tear once she starts growing out of them. I think she should be wearing something of a dress suit, professional looking but a short tight skirt, and nylon leggings that end just under the skirt.

Transformation starts with the hand that was cut, then maybe instead of spreading up from there it affects any area the light from the moonrock is touching. Any exposed skin the light shines on begins to develop black fur. Since she's getting hot and her clothes are getting tighter she'll start taking them off/ tearing them off exposing more skin and thus making the transformation advance further by exposing more of her body to the light.

As for the mental changes, I think she won't be completely overcome by the beast before reverting. She gets to the simulated sunlight just before her mind is totally lost to the change, but she'll definitely feel the beast clawing at her thoughts and suppressing her memory before it's over. Maybe have her stare up at the fake sun in the exhibit to force the change out from her mind first and have her physically revert after mentally regaining control so she has to experience the complete change from woman to wolf and back again without losing consciousness. She snaps back to human as she reaches the very edge of the mental change, one second more would have caused the beast to take over totally.

I think that's about all I've got for that at the moment. I do however have a few others I've thought up today while at work and have been dieing to get them down in writing before I have a chance to forget them.

1. The Infection part two. Karen and Maria's story continues with Maria having helped Karen escape captivity before anyone has a chance to find her in the cage in place of the wolf. However, her entire transformation was recorded by the lab's surveillance system and now the government is looking for both of them. They're on the run, having emptied their bank accounts, ditched their cell phones and credit cards, anything that could be used to track their movements across the country. They stay under the radar and off the grid, paying for everything in cash and driving a cheap used van. They load the van up with some medical supplies, chemistry equipment and heavy metal chains and bars, taking it all out to an old abandoned cabin deep in the woods halfway across the country (not sure where yet, like what state) that had been in Karen's family for years but that nobody really knew about, it hadn't been used in over 20 years. They stay out there away from the world and try to find a solution to Karen's lycanthropy. Using an old gas powered generator to run their chemistry equipment, computers, video camera. They document her transformations while she's chained and eventually weld a cage together to keep her in as it's more comfortable for her than to be chained up.

They keep all this equipment and cage in an old barn behind the cabin, Karen's grandfather used to keep a few horses there but not much else, it wasn't really a farm and had no big open field, just a small clearing around the barn. So it's very out of the way and miles from anybody. No internet connection and it's a dead zone for cell phones.

There's a lot more stuff to this one, if you accept this one there might be a part three.

2. Park Ranger (rough title.. very subject to change) Alright, female park ranger, Native American descent and very pretty. One night she comes to the aid of three campers who are attacked by a pack of wolves in her park. One male and two female campers. The male is killed, torn apart, very brutal, the girls are only wounded, and our ranger is also wounded. Each with only a single bite on arm or leg. The wolves are driven off, dawn breaks, and the girls are taken to safety at a nearby medical station operated by a close friend of the park ranger. The doctor here is really only equipped to do first aid treatments and the occasional snake bite, a wolf attack is out of her league and she's glad to see the wounds are relatively minor and bandages the three ladies up. The park ranger radios in the attack, but help won't arrive until the next afternoon. So while the two female campers mourn the death of their male friend the ranger and the doctor talk about this and that for a few hours. Until the sun sets and the moon rises. The campers start to feel ill, hot, hearts pounding, breathing heavily. While the doctor examines them the ranger develops the same symptoms and all three begin to transform inside the examination room at the medical station. The pack of wolves return and begin howling outside and the girls remark that they can understand the wolves, that they're calling to them. But the girls don't want to go with them, don't want to change and join the pack perhaps never to be seen again. The ranger comments about how people sometimes go missing, that maybe the ones that aren't found aren't simply buried somewhere.. but that they changed and became animals. She doesn't want to end up like that, a missing person or a beast attacking helpless campers. So she gives her gun to the doctor and asks her to shoot them all. The doctor refuses but the ranger explains that the gun is full of tranquilizer darts, confirming that the doctor feels slightly better about the request. Before carrying out the order she witness the three women transforming at different rates and reacting in different ways. One camper, a blond, tears off all her clothes, lying on her back naked she gradually transforms. Her pleas for help slowly getting deeper, becoming growls and whimpers and whines only a canine could produce. Before the blond is completely changed she is shot with a dart in the leg and quickly passes out, completing her change while unconscious. The second girl, a brunette keeps all her clothes on (except her shoes) and cradles herself as she changes, repeating to herself that "This isn't real. It's not happening. It's just a bad dream" throughout the entire ordeal. Her clothes tear slightly, but she refuses to remove any of them because in her mind it would be admitting it was really happening. She too is shot with a dart before her transformation can complete. The ranger removes her pants and underwear just before growing a long black wolf tail, she gets down on all fours and begs to be shot. She pleads as she tears her shirt open, revealing her shrinking breasts and the rows of nipples forming on her stomach. Before her face can fully change she too is shot with a dart.

The doctor locks them all in the exam room while they're out cold, and barricades the door with a desk. She then retreats into her office and does the same, locking it behind her and moving a heavy desk to block the door. There she huddles in fear until dawn when she hears the girls calling to be let out. At the end they're all human again, sweaty hungry and two of them are naked while one is wearing torn clothes. They don't explain to anyone about being transformed, but agree to be locked up every full moon under the doctor's supervision. Keeping it all a secret.

3. Clean up Crew.
A female janitor, who would be considered very attractive if not for one thing, a huge scar on the left side of her face. A scar made by the claws of a werewolf many years ago. She keeps her long hair hanging over the left side of her face to cover the scars, and her missing left eye. She keeps that eye closed tightly, it's not scarred shut, but the glass eye she has in it's place is embarrassing. She didn't want to look like a pirate so she doesn't wear a patch. She just keeps her hair hanging over half her face.

She's a night shift janitor at an office complex. She avoids human contact and social interactions because she's too self conscious about her scar and false eye. So she's quite content to work late in the empty building. Problem is though that she's well aware of the fact that she's been a werewolf ever since the attack. Three nights a month she has to request off in advance and lock herself away behind a heavy door in a room with no windows. Her boss at work gets tired of this and refuses to let her off work this month, she begs and pleads and tries to come up with a dozen reasons why she can't work but he keeps refusing. Eventually she caves and agrees to come in on her "special night", making a special arrangement that she'd work fast and clean up everything then head home early. Her boss agreed, but reminded her that she would only be paid for the short time she was there. She didn't care about that though, she just couldn't afford to lose her job. So that night she planned to work extra fast and rush home, but it didn't go as planned. She ends up staying too late and begins to feel the change take hold while she's still working. She strips off her work clothes, consisting of little more than a pair of gray overalls and boots, then clad in only her underwear she gets on the elevator and rides it down the the lowest basement level. She stumbles out of the elevator and rips off her undergarments which were so soaked with sweat that they'd become virtually transparent. Confident that she's no longer a danger to anyone if she transforms in the subbasement she gives in to the change, dropping to all fours. During the transformation her scars fade and the glass eye pops out, clacking to the floor. The eye she'd lost as a human begins to regenerate while she changes into a wolf, it's disorienting to her when this happens, especially since her other eye remains unchanged throughout most of the transformation. So with one wolf eye and one human eye her view is very strange, one eye seeing in full color the other in black and white. Her one wolf eye being very adapted to the dark of the basement the other human eye taking longer to adjust. She's always disappointed the morning after when she finds her left eye is still missing in human form, and that her scars have reappeared. She hates that part of her curse.

How do those sound?

mb78 · 06-21-2011

I like TF-Viewer's #1, just because I like the idea of following up on your previous stories. Just about any of them would make for awesome sequels. You've also not done an "expected" (non-first) change since your first one, and I greatly enjoy those.

sodacat · 06-21-2011

Was going to suggest something but

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but it clashes a bit with what I really enjoy writing, which is the mind of the girl either changing into or being replaced by the more feral mind of a beast.

That pretty much rules it out entirely. So here's something else that popped into my head when I was browsing CYOC last night.

A writer, after having a nervous breakdown attempting to finish her current novel, is ordered by her publicist to go on mandatory vacation. She is sent to a private resort in the mountains, known for both skiing and hunting. After she arrives a storm moves in, cutting off any travel in or out of the community for the next several days.

She awakes from her first night's sleep very refreshed, if not entirely feeling herself, and sets out to explore the small community. Some of the people are uncharacteristically cold to her, while others are overly friendly. That night the lodge's receptionist meets the writer in private and tells her that she must get out of the resort that night, no matter what, or she will die. She explains no further, but it rattles the writer enough that she attempts to power through the storm anyways. Her vehicle eventually gets stuck, and she only makes it a few steps on foot before collapsing.

The next morning she wakes up, none the worse for wear, in her cabin, and both her car and the receptionist have disappeared. A little digging around reveals the truth of what's going on: her cabin is a magical containment unit, designed to collect and condense mystical energy into a single point: her. The end result is the creation of a werewolf, which would then be hunted by guests who paid handsomely for the opportunity to mount a mythical beast in their trophy room. She is too late to stop the effects of the cabin, and escapes into the woods, along with the hunters, as the changes start to take hold.

Not sure how much longer after that you'd want to continue the story, since you typically end it after the transformation.

Ladylike255 · 06-22-2011

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Feel free to PM it to me if you'd be more comfortable requesting it that way!

I've sent in a note to you! Is my idea still uncomfortable for you?

Cursebearer · 07-18-2011

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First, request accepted. I'm a bit less enthusiastic about writing a small-chested character, but the Asian part helps, and I don't much enjoy my own work anyway. The idea is just phenomenal and I'd love to write it. Speaking of phenomenal ideas, all three of those others are just great. I'll officially accept one more of them right now, of your choosing, and I have to say I'd just love to hear what else you have planned for your number one idea. I haven't had the chance to revisit characters before, so it would be an interesting opportunity on top of that.

As for the other two stories you don't pick, keep them on your mind, please. I'd love to come back to them, I just don't want to overwhelm myself by accepting four requests at once.

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VERY interesting! Consider this one accepted, the premise is just fantastically outside of what I normally get. Did you have anything in mind for what the woman looked like? And, if you would like me to continue this story beyond just the transformation, I would actually be delighted to, to an extent. I do have to keep these down to manageable one-month projects, but again, the premise is worth exploring further. I may be a fetish author, but deep down in my heart, I can't resist a good story when it presents itself. Did you have something planned for a resolution, or were you wanting me to wing it?

sodacat · 08-24-2011

Whoa, didn't even notice that reply until now. I figured that after discovering the truth the writer would call up her publicist to try and get her to send help. The publicist would reveal that she was the one who finalised the deal, as the writer's tanking book sales were destroying her and the only way she'd ever be able to bring herself back into the black was for the writer to be dead. At that point the hunters surround the cabin. One of the hunters tries to shoot at her, but his comrades stop him because they could only make a trophy out of a fully transformed wolf. After that their preparations would prove inadequate and she would hunt most of them down slasher movie style.

The next morning, human again but making use of her dwindling wolf senses, the writer locates the receptionist tied up in another cabin. They had been intending to use her as the next prey should the writer have been able to escape. The receptionist had seen several people used as targets, but only with the previous one had she realised what was actually happening, and by then it was too late to save them. She then asks the writer what she plans on doing, and she honestly has no idea. Writing hadn't really been working out for her, and she did enjoy the mountains. The receptionist then mentions that there is a very long waiting list of hunters, and they all pay upfront. The writer considers it, but first she needs to pay a visit to her publicist back in Seattle.

06-20-2011	#37
splinterfox Frequent Poster Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 132	Re: Request a Story Well if your still open to ideas... Well I've tried to write this out a few times. But I personally hate my stories so I scrap it every time. so my idea goes like this: A girl starts having fever dreams, and blacking out at 10 pm or so every night. she awakes to find her room in dismay every morning(doesnt go noticed by others since she lives alone). But finds that after each morning she is changed little by little into a wolf. The whole story takes place over thirty days or so, and i had originally wrote in a boyfriend to anchor her emotions and to provide a means of support. i was aiming my story to be serious emotional story with little to no sex, but i simply can't do that at my level of writing. Maybe I'll get to it one day. But I'd like to see you take it on, and if you do decide to take it up, feel free to alter the idea in any way, I'd love to see what you could do with it.

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TF-Viewer Slave to the Process Forum Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 12,779	Re: Request a Story I have been sitting on an idea for a while. Was going to try and write it myself but I have to admit I suck at writing. So I guess I'll put it out here and see if you want to take it up later. The setting would be in a museum. We have a smart, sexy female tour guide showing a group of children around the exhibits (they're on a school trip). One of the exhibits has taxidermy wolves on display and the children being children climb onto the display (that was just behind a velvet rope instead of in a glass case) and knock one of the wolves over. The tour guide sees this happening and manages to catch the taxidermy wolf in mid fall and cuts her hand on one of it's fangs. Not badly but enough to break the skin and shed a few drops of blood. The children are escorted out by their teacher (who's very disappointed with them) and the tour guide goes about her duties of straightening up the display. Skipping ahead a few hours. It's closing time and our guide is closing down the displays for the night when she wanders into one of the science exhibits that happens to contain a rare moon rock. As part of the display they have an artificial sun lamp that shines on the rock to simulate moonlight as it's reflected off the tiny piece of actual moon that they have. As she approaches it to turn off the light she starts to feel warm and sweaty, she never manages to reach the light switch as she suddenly begins to transform. It starts with where she cut herself on the wolf's fang earlier that day, fur sprouting around the cut as the cut begins to heal itself rapidly. Nails turn to claws, hand stretching etc. She tears her clothes off to relieve the heat and because they're becoming too tight. She is overcome by the transformation, but not before realizing what happened. She knows it's absurd but the wolf on display must have been a werewolf and cutting her hand on it's fang was the same as being bitten by one. Now standing in the light of the small moon rock she knows she's a werewolf herself now, but she also knows that it's not actually a full moon outside, and that only the moon rock is causing it. Desperately she tries to reach for the light switch but finds she's transformed too much, she's forced to all fours and can no longer reach it. It dawns on her that there's another way to stop the change. Another one of the science exhibits has a huge sun on display, it's fake of course, but it simulates real sun light and if simulated moon light is causing her to change than simulated sun light could change her back. So she drags her changing body out of the lunar exhibit towards the solar exhibit, she reaches it just as her head and mind begin to fully change and the transformation quickly reverses itself. Now she's there naked and drenched in sweat on the floor of the museum, gets up after a while and shuts off the power to the lunar exhibit from a fuse box outside the room. She has to do that so she can go inside and retrieve her cell phone from among her destroyed and discarded clothing without transforming again from the fake moonlight. After getting her phone she calls her female roommate to come to the museum and bring some extra clothes for her, there wasn't time to explain on the phone and insists that she hurry before the night security guards find her. Her friend shows up, gives our now naked guide the spare clothes and they drive home where all is explained (but probably not believed). She also mentions they should buy a cage or some chains because the real full moon was next week.

06-21-2011	#43
TF-Viewer Slave to the Process Forum Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 12,779	Re: Request a Story Hmm, well as for that last request's details. I think I'd like the tour guide to be Asian and slender framed, a bit of a switch from the usual large chested girls. Let's have this one on the petite side with a relatively small chest. But don't worry, that just means her small clothes will be easier to tear once she starts growing out of them. I think she should be wearing something of a dress suit, professional looking but a short tight skirt, and nylon leggings that end just under the skirt. Transformation starts with the hand that was cut, then maybe instead of spreading up from there it affects any area the light from the moonrock is touching. Any exposed skin the light shines on begins to develop black fur. Since she's getting hot and her clothes are getting tighter she'll start taking them off/ tearing them off exposing more skin and thus making the transformation advance further by exposing more of her body to the light. As for the mental changes, I think she won't be completely overcome by the beast before reverting. She gets to the simulated sunlight just before her mind is totally lost to the change, but she'll definitely feel the beast clawing at her thoughts and suppressing her memory before it's over. Maybe have her stare up at the fake sun in the exhibit to force the change out from her mind first and have her physically revert after mentally regaining control so she has to experience the complete change from woman to wolf and back again without losing consciousness. She snaps back to human as she reaches the very edge of the mental change, one second more would have caused the beast to take over totally. I think that's about all I've got for that at the moment. I do however have a few others I've thought up today while at work and have been dieing to get them down in writing before I have a chance to forget them. 1. The Infection part two. Karen and Maria's story continues with Maria having helped Karen escape captivity before anyone has a chance to find her in the cage in place of the wolf. However, her entire transformation was recorded by the lab's surveillance system and now the government is looking for both of them. They're on the run, having emptied their bank accounts, ditched their cell phones and credit cards, anything that could be used to track their movements across the country. They stay under the radar and off the grid, paying for everything in cash and driving a cheap used van. They load the van up with some medical supplies, chemistry equipment and heavy metal chains and bars, taking it all out to an old abandoned cabin deep in the woods halfway across the country (not sure where yet, like what state) that had been in Karen's family for years but that nobody really knew about, it hadn't been used in over 20 years. They stay out there away from the world and try to find a solution to Karen's lycanthropy. Using an old gas powered generator to run their chemistry equipment, computers, video camera. They document her transformations while she's chained and eventually weld a cage together to keep her in as it's more comfortable for her than to be chained up. They keep all this equipment and cage in an old barn behind the cabin, Karen's grandfather used to keep a few horses there but not much else, it wasn't really a farm and had no big open field, just a small clearing around the barn. So it's very out of the way and miles from anybody. No internet connection and it's a dead zone for cell phones. There's a lot more stuff to this one, if you accept this one there might be a part three. 2. Park Ranger (rough title.. very subject to change) Alright, female park ranger, Native American descent and very pretty. One night she comes to the aid of three campers who are attacked by a pack of wolves in her park. One male and two female campers. The male is killed, torn apart, very brutal, the girls are only wounded, and our ranger is also wounded. Each with only a single bite on arm or leg. The wolves are driven off, dawn breaks, and the girls are taken to safety at a nearby medical station operated by a close friend of the park ranger. The doctor here is really only equipped to do first aid treatments and the occasional snake bite, a wolf attack is out of her league and she's glad to see the wounds are relatively minor and bandages the three ladies up. The park ranger radios in the attack, but help won't arrive until the next afternoon. So while the two female campers mourn the death of their male friend the ranger and the doctor talk about this and that for a few hours. Until the sun sets and the moon rises. The campers start to feel ill, hot, hearts pounding, breathing heavily. While the doctor examines them the ranger develops the same symptoms and all three begin to transform inside the examination room at the medical station. The pack of wolves return and begin howling outside and the girls remark that they can understand the wolves, that they're calling to them. But the girls don't want to go with them, don't want to change and join the pack perhaps never to be seen again. The ranger comments about how people sometimes go missing, that maybe the ones that aren't found aren't simply buried somewhere.. but that they changed and became animals. She doesn't want to end up like that, a missing person or a beast attacking helpless campers. So she gives her gun to the doctor and asks her to shoot them all. The doctor refuses but the ranger explains that the gun is full of tranquilizer darts, confirming that the doctor feels slightly better about the request. Before carrying out the order she witness the three women transforming at different rates and reacting in different ways. One camper, a blond, tears off all her clothes, lying on her back naked she gradually transforms. Her pleas for help slowly getting deeper, becoming growls and whimpers and whines only a canine could produce. Before the blond is completely changed she is shot with a dart in the leg and quickly passes out, completing her change while unconscious. The second girl, a brunette keeps all her clothes on (except her shoes) and cradles herself as she changes, repeating to herself that "This isn't real. It's not happening. It's just a bad dream" throughout the entire ordeal. Her clothes tear slightly, but she refuses to remove any of them because in her mind it would be admitting it was really happening. She too is shot with a dart before her transformation can complete. The ranger removes her pants and underwear just before growing a long black wolf tail, she gets down on all fours and begs to be shot. She pleads as she tears her shirt open, revealing her shrinking breasts and the rows of nipples forming on her stomach. Before her face can fully change she too is shot with a dart. The doctor locks them all in the exam room while they're out cold, and barricades the door with a desk. She then retreats into her office and does the same, locking it behind her and moving a heavy desk to block the door. There she huddles in fear until dawn when she hears the girls calling to be let out. At the end they're all human again, sweaty hungry and two of them are naked while one is wearing torn clothes. They don't explain to anyone about being transformed, but agree to be locked up every full moon under the doctor's supervision. Keeping it all a secret. 3. Clean up Crew. A female janitor, who would be considered very attractive if not for one thing, a huge scar on the left side of her face. A scar made by the claws of a werewolf many years ago. She keeps her long hair hanging over the left side of her face to cover the scars, and her missing left eye. She keeps that eye closed tightly, it's not scarred shut, but the glass eye she has in it's place is embarrassing. She didn't want to look like a pirate so she doesn't wear a patch. She just keeps her hair hanging over half her face. She's a night shift janitor at an office complex. She avoids human contact and social interactions because she's too self conscious about her scar and false eye. So she's quite content to work late in the empty building. Problem is though that she's well aware of the fact that she's been a werewolf ever since the attack. Three nights a month she has to request off in advance and lock herself away behind a heavy door in a room with no windows. Her boss at work gets tired of this and refuses to let her off work this month, she begs and pleads and tries to come up with a dozen reasons why she can't work but he keeps refusing. Eventually she caves and agrees to come in on her "special night", making a special arrangement that she'd work fast and clean up everything then head home early. Her boss agreed, but reminded her that she would only be paid for the short time she was there. She didn't care about that though, she just couldn't afford to lose her job. So that night she planned to work extra fast and rush home, but it didn't go as planned. She ends up staying too late and begins to feel the change take hold while she's still working. She strips off her work clothes, consisting of little more than a pair of gray overalls and boots, then clad in only her underwear she gets on the elevator and rides it down the the lowest basement level. She stumbles out of the elevator and rips off her undergarments which were so soaked with sweat that they'd become virtually transparent. Confident that she's no longer a danger to anyone if she transforms in the subbasement she gives in to the change, dropping to all fours. During the transformation her scars fade and the glass eye pops out, clacking to the floor. The eye she'd lost as a human begins to regenerate while she changes into a wolf, it's disorienting to her when this happens, especially since her other eye remains unchanged throughout most of the transformation. So with one wolf eye and one human eye her view is very strange, one eye seeing in full color the other in black and white. Her one wolf eye being very adapted to the dark of the basement the other human eye taking longer to adjust. She's always disappointed the morning after when she finds her left eye is still missing in human form, and that her scars have reappeared. She hates that part of her curse. How do those sound? Last edited by TF-Viewer; 06-21-2011 at 03:13 PM.

06-21-2011	#44
mb78 Process Fan Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 57	Re: Request a Story I like TF-Viewer's #1, just because I like the idea of following up on your previous stories. Just about any of them would make for awesome sequels. You've also not done an "expected" (non-first) change since your first one, and I greatly enjoy those.