Bad Sheep (Succubus TF, AR, TG, BE) (Complete)

[wandering_spirit]

I finally ended up, rather than drawing a sequence, writing one where a be-speckled man wearing boxers turns into a succubus.

I actually ended up using bits and pieces for the game 'Catherine' as inspiration, which turned out pretty good, to be honest.

Hope you guys enjoy it.

[frice2000]

Quite a few spelling errors in it which brought it down a bit. Other then that a interesting enough concept but I don't understand how some of the questions led to some of the changes he experienced. Tightening up the rules and making that more apparent would be pretty intriguing if you do more in this universe. Overall, not bad and am interested to see what you write in the future.

[wandering_spirit]

Originally Posted by frice2000

Quite a few spelling errors in it which brought it down a bit. Other then that a interesting enough concept but I don't understand how some of the questions led to some of the changes he experienced. Tightening up the rules and making that more apparent would be pretty intriguing if you do more in this universe. Overall, not bad and am interested to see what you write in the future.

Thanks. As for the change, they didn't really have a set order. I just used the Law/Chaos system that Atlus loves so much in its Megami titles, used a dice roller to select questions, and chose answers to lean it towards Chaos.

I didn't really think of making it a set universe, and I usually write on a whim - which explains why there are mistakes.

Still, I'm glad you like it.

[zdarkness]

Whats' funny is that I was actually watching a playthrough of Catherine earlier today.

Quite the coincidence.

Or... is it?