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Re: Jimbo's intro and a story.
I just realised something, i'm not sure if it's an error or not, Rick is worried about someone finding him as Rebecca with someone elses ticket, railway tickets in the UK (to my knowledge) do not contain name or gender, unless Rick was using a travel card of some kind, which would have a name and a photograph attached.
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Re: Jimbo's intro and a story.
yeah, that is kinda dumb on my part, changed a lot of things in the story since what I posted here, I might take it out and put that in somewhere else. I wanted a "papers please" bit. any ideas you could give might help. cheers for the feed back.
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Re: Jimbo's intro and a story.
got off my ass after being so tired from the weekend and did a page tonight, yes in the story its jeans, but skirts do make legs look hotter
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Re: Jimbo's intro and a story.
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Re: Jimbo's intro and a story.
Well that clears a lot up, I'll add that in the story later about having both male and female travel cards.
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08-06-2014
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Re: Jimbo's intro and a story.
little update on the storyboard, gonna do one more page then the big "Ta-da!" door open. might draw Nick too (I want to change his name but cant think of a good one)
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08-12-2014
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Re: Jimbo's intro and a story.
well this is the end of the storyboard would like to thank Scorch and ThelovelyJoanne for the feed back you guys are awesome, gonna get back to writing now gotten a few good ideas from watching old movies over the weekend.
 
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08-13-2014
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Re: Jimbo's intro and a story.
I'm loving the storyboard -great stuff. Can't wait to see where this story heads!
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08-13-2014
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Re: Jimbo's intro and a story.
I'm pleased you like it Joanne, I may draw more stuff from the story after I get more chapters done and something big happens, (been drawing kinky stuff too) as for the writing bit, I want to post it in big chunks rather than a little bit here and there, might PM you stuff to proof read if you'd like that.
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08-15-2014
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Re: Jimbo's intro and a story.
Not sure how much I can add to the creative process - but who am I to turn such an offer down!
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