Bitch [Story / TF / Were-dog / Forced] - Page 2

LycanDope · 02-26-2015

*whines greedily* noooo you should still do stuff tooooo! Different scene, your own style... It'll rock! Dooo iiiittt

sodacat · 03-02-2015

This was pretty great. I really like the interplay and conflict between human and inhuman desires, and you nail that in this story.

LycanDope · 03-02-2015

@sodacat - thank you! I originally intended to have her human side completely wiped after she changes but decided to leave it in. Helps to show that her change is more than just a temporary thing. That it's affecting her human side and changing her deep within her psyche. Plus, *I* think it's a lot more fun to show her humanity buckling and begging for the animalistic urges pulling at her.

In the same way, I changed the ending right before release. Originally she was going to either be "cured" after her first change or it to a were thing that she fights against. I decided on the ending to follow through with how it's changed her and touched her.

02-26-2015	#1
LycanDope Smutty Lady Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 622	Re: Bitch [Story / TF / Were-dog / Forced] whines greedily noooo you should still do stuff tooooo! Different scene, your own style... It'll rock! Dooo iiiittt

03-02-2015	#3
LycanDope Smutty Lady Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 622	Re: Bitch [Story / TF / Were-dog / Forced] @sodacat - thank you! I originally intended to have her human side completely wiped after she changes but decided to leave it in. Helps to show that her change is more than just a temporary thing. That it's affecting her human side and changing her deep within her psyche. Plus, I think it's a lot more fun to show her humanity buckling and begging for the animalistic urges pulling at her. In the same way, I changed the ending right before release. Originally she was going to either be "cured" after her first change or it to a were thing that she fights against. I decided on the ending to follow through with how it's changed her and touched her.