Flu Shots Part Five (Ready 12 16)

[saren]

Nice review, fully agree. Dreamtales created the King Jeoffrey of age regression comics. Thats a great writing, if it is (like godleydemon said) intended

[DangerousDave]

Originally Posted by godleydemon

a chapter 4 that begins to reverse the roles again.

Originally Posted by bubbleman

I rather like this idea :3

So do I.

But not because I have any problem with the younger sister. She's a bratty little girl who suddenly got the upper hand and is taking advantage of it. I get that. She definitely doesn't inspire the same hatred in me as king Joffrey did (the game of thrones character saren referenced, in case any of you have been living in a cave )

I'd like the sizes to flip back because the formerly big sister is already prepubescent, so the next step is diapers, which isn't really my cup of tea. Having said that, I know that a lot of people do like that, so I will understand if DT caters to all of his fans.

But maybe they swap back after that?

[Janus Steel]

Being a fan of SW, AR, AP, and Attribute Theft a part of me always loves the DreamTales stories. I look forward to each one that comes out, unless it's GTS cause that's not my thing. And I'm huge into submission and domination if it's written correctly. I don't regret a sense of Zoe being truly being dominate. Just bigger and bitchy.

My hang ups are always story based... like why is nothing happing to the brother!? He got the same flu shots. I understand it's more female driven, but trust me some of is like to see male AP too, if it's because the brother hasn't anyone to compare against I would rebuttal and say Ice Cream guy could be the brothers foil. the boys can switch places too! And think of the dynamic of both younger kids becoming adults and one adult is now a kid... And ice cream man becomes ice cream boy and we have the exciting adventures of ackward family bonding... Or maybe no bonding just make the flu shots affect the brother as well. Sorry, story rant over.

Anyway after godley and I discussed I went through and reread the 3 parts. And I'llsay this because it caught my eye. Madison and Zoe's breasts are just glaringly colored. I thought at first this was just shadow and lighting but upon closer inspection it can be seen when Madisonand Zoe are standing nearly nude in front of their younger brother, sorry but I NEVER was in my underwear when I was around my little brother guess these three are a lot closer than my siblings and I 😜, and again in book three right before the infamous "in puberty"line. It's really glaring there because she has what looks like the beginning of pics bit the coloring also tries to show she has some, albeit small, breasts. And its super noticeable when Zoe grows in the third book.

From my experience doing that Palcomix Akane vs Shampoo story I photo manipulated into a BE/Attribute Theft story it looks like they're the same breasts just cut onto the next person.

I know because I spent a lot of time trying to get skin tones and stuff working when I was moving from panel to panel. Drawing is hard, it's why I write. 😛

That said, thank you DT for giving us process to talk about. I'm awaiting the next part.

[godleydemon]

Originally Posted by DangerousDave

So do I.

But not because I have any problem with the younger sister. She's a bratty little girl who suddenly got the upper hand and is taking advantage of it. I get that. She definitely doesn't inspire the same hatred in me as king Joffrey did (the game of thrones character saren referenced, in case any of you have been living in a cave )

I'd like the sizes to flip back because the formerly big sister is already prepubescent, so the next step is diapers, which isn't really my cup of tea. Having said that, I know that a lot of people do like that, so I will understand if DT caters to all of his fans.

But maybe they swap back after that?

Well my main purpose for them to swap back in my review, was because the bratty younger sister had gotten to a point to where I really wanted her to get some just rewards against her. She'd pushed her luck so darn far and the older sister didn't seem like she deserved it. So I kind of wanted to see some dynamic there where the older sister got her revenge a little on the younger one and kind of put her in her place. But I want it to be in a very slow regression.

The first comic that showed the regression of the older sister happened at first, WAY to fast. Then we saw slower regression throughout the entire comic series. But that first regression was huge. From like 18 - 20 to like 12 - 14. Then it was like a year a regression after that.

[Dreamtales]

Originally Posted by godleydemon

... the bratty younger sister had gotten to a point to where I really wanted her to get some just rewards against her. She'd pushed her luck so darn far and the older sister didn't seem like she deserved it. So I kind of wanted to see some dynamic there where the older sister got her revenge a little on the younger one and kind of put her in her place. But I want it to be in a very slow regression.

Hey thanks for all the feedback! I realize not everybody is going to be happy with the plot, but I'm definitely listening and will consider the feedback in upcoming chapters. And I'm doing my best to try to catch the consistency errors - these are really difficult to find, and occur even in comics by the major publishers.

And don't worry, Madison, Zoe and even little brother Michael still have a lot of changes in store. If there are specific things you'd like to see let me know.

[Janus Steel]

Originally Posted by Dreamtales

And don't worry, Madison, Zoe and even little brother Michael still have a lot of changes in store. If there are specific things you'd like to see let me know.

On the subject of specific things I took some time to think about this.

I'd kinda like to see The Wrong Sister continued I don't know if it had bad sales or not but that one showed a lot of promise, to me.

I was also wondering, have you ever thought about doing "identical" twins. Like taking the Lauren & Betsy dynamic where they grow up together but they look the same and childhood friends/relatives and potential boyfriends/girlfriends and then one just blossoms, via magic or device or what have you and the other's stuck and they have to deal with the change in their relationship. It seems to me that you could get a lot of interesting narratives out of that kinda story. Flash fowards, flashbacks, asides, things like that.

And I know this is probably not your cup of tea but are we ever going to see any of your characters being Bi or Pansexual? Where they're attracted to more than just the herto option. Just trying to think of dynamics that could help for future stories.

Just my thoughts on things I'd love to see from you in the future. Interested to see what happens in part 4.

[Dreamtales]

Originally Posted by Janus Steel

On the subject of specific things I took some time to think about this.

I'd kinda like to see The Wrong Sister continued I don't know if it had bad sales or not but that one showed a lot of promise, to me.

I was also wondering, have you ever thought about doing "identical" twins.

And I know this is probably not your cup of tea but are we ever going to see any of your characters being Bi or Pansexual? Where they're attracted to more than just the herto option. Just trying to think of dynamics that could help for future stories.

Just my thoughts on things I'd love to see from you in the future. Interested to see what happens in part 4.

Thanks, those are all nice ideas. I'm definitely thinking of continuing Wrong Sister, I liked the characters too. I have some ideas sketched out for a sequel.

And the twins idea is cool. Maybe M / F fraternal twins?

I'd consider doing a lesbian comic, that could be fun.

Thanks again for the thoughts!

[Janus Steel]

Originally Posted by Dreamtales

Thanks, those are all nice ideas. I'm definitely thinking of continuing Wrong Sister, I liked the characters too. I have some ideas sketched out for a sequel.

And the twins idea is cool. Maybe M / F fraternal twins?

I'd consider doing a lesbian comic, that could be fun.

Thanks again for the thoughts!

I think you could get away with M / F fraternal twins, it'd be an interesting comic.

[bubbleman]

Originally Posted by Dreamtales

I'd consider doing a lesbian comic, that could be fun.

Yes, please~