More general 'increased beauty'

[Gagecoalbrace]

EGS is a treasure trove of TG and IB (one character has the special power to turn anyone hit with her beam in to a more sexy version of themselves males turn into female versions of themselves)

[bstgate]

The comic "Remote out of Control" is a bit short, but well worth its money for its IB content in part 2. It features the all-too-rare plot of two teenage girls getting a universal remote and simply using it to improve their bodies. Although all processes occur off-panel except for the BE, it features hair lengthening, weight loss, BR (from huge to manageable), facial IB with thinner nose and prettier eyes, slight hip expansion and possibly a little AP (maybe from high school to college age). One girl gets minor improvements besides BE, while the other gets a complete makeover.

The remote also has a "horny" button and an "orgasm" button which get used several times.

Despite being hosted on Bimbo Story Club, none of them have gotten stupid (yet).

http://bimbostoryclub.com/comic/Remote-out-of-control

[Dex164]

Originally Posted by bstgate

The comic "Remote out of Control" is a bit short, but well worth its money for its IB content in part 2. It features the all-too-rare plot of two teenage girls getting a universal remote and simply using it to improve their bodies. Although all processes occur off-panel except for the BE, it features hair lengthening, weight loss, BR (from huge to manageable), facial IB with thinner nose and prettier eyes, slight hip expansion and possibly a little AP (maybe from high school to college age). One girl gets minor improvements besides BE, while the other gets a complete makeover.

The remote also has a "horny" button and an "orgasm" button which get used several times.

Despite being hosted on Bimbo Story Club, none of them have gotten stupid (yet).

http://bimbostoryclub.com/comic/Remote-out-of-control

DO NOT PAY FOR THIS STORY
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/660575/df7c76465a/

It has been available online for free for at least 2 years at various download sites. It has little to no process and is originally part of BEStoryClub. It is NOT WORTH that insane price tag for such an old comic. Hell, it is not even worth it when it's free.

[BillPratt]

Originally Posted by Dex164

DO NOT PAY FOR THIS STORY
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/660575/df7c76465a/

It has been available online for free for at least 2 years at various download sites. It has little to no process and is originally part of BEStoryClub. It is NOT WORTH that insane price tag for such an old comic. Hell, it is not even worth it when it's free.

Glad you approve. Yes, it was written about 8 years ago for the BE Story club, ergo glossing over the beauty enhancement material and going light on the mind control. Remote Chaos should be showing up at the BE story Club sometime in the next year or so.

[catfish27]

Originally Posted by BillPratt

Remote Chaos should be showing up at the BE story Club sometime in the next year or so.

I see Part 1 is out. Are you happy with the adaptation of your script?

(I did some proofreading of the script as it existed two years ago, so the comic should be quite relevant to this thread.)

[BillPratt]

Originally Posted by catfish27

I see Part 1 is out. Are you happy with the adaptation of your script?

(I did some proofreading of the script as it existed two years ago, so the comic should be quite relevant to this thread.)

Can't say I've seen it, but I'll keep an eye out.

[BillPratt]

The Apogee model works, but it works by not showing exactly what you're going to get. The goal is to show enough to get a sale and no more. Spoiling the moneyshot removes the incentive to make the final purchase. You do not see "No Luke. I am your father." in the ad. The movies trailer does not contain Bruce Willis's death certificate or Jaye Davidson's wang.

For a four or five part arc, releasing the first part is probably a good sample and you factor the production expenses into the price of the remainder. For a short work your options are limited. Either you have to work off the previously built reputation of the creative team, you release it into the wild as a loss leader to attract future sales, or you release a page or two of the lead up.

The reason you can find this stuff so easily is the Bestoryclub is not executing takedowns and don't seem particularly interested in doing so. Regardless, something being easy does not make it the right thing to do. Not buy and convince others not to buy are both good options. Playing the smart cow game just waters down the moral high ground.

[Yarrcanite]

Well, the 4th part of Remote out of Control came out years ago, 2008 from the looks of it... While still paid material, the project's probably dropped by now... So it's somewhat of a gray area in general I suppose, paying for old stuff that the artist no longer probably cares for...

http://bestoryclub.com/comic/Remote-out-of-Control has all 4 parts of it for those interested.

[Vengeance1701]

Originally Posted by Yarrcanite

Well, the 4th part of Remote out of Control came out years ago, 2008 from the looks of it... While still paid material, the project's probably dropped by now... So it's somewhat of a gray area in general I suppose, paying for old stuff that the artist no longer probably cares for...

http://bestoryclub.com/comic/Remote-out-of-Control has all 4 parts of it for those interested.

Boom. Thanks, Yarrcanite.

[BillPratt]

And the guy who wrote it asking you not to should be a bit of a hint, too.

[Vengeance1701]

You knew I was going to have to delete that post, right? Also, consider this a warning, Gumby. If it shows up on a paid content site, no post. Whatever their business model is, that's what it is. We can't post paid content, end of story.

[BillPratt]

I can assure you that there is emotional attachment on the part of at least one of the creators, but there is no financial. BESC is purely work for hire. There are no royalties or residuals.