Midna BE Story

[Daichi Azure]

Actually keep up the work...I have an idea. Illia and Zelda being cursed with the exact same curse. Torn between to women...

I'm considering bringing other Zelda gals into the story. But first I'm waiting for people to rediscover the story a bit...

[Daichi Azure]

i just read it...but one thing you could delve into the relations that were forming a bit more without causing a sex scene...

I'd like some more points I need to improve on. And be clear please.

[spidey0527]

It's great to see the story continuing. I wish I was more of a writer so that I could give you useful tips. The only thing that really comes to mind is to make the writing more detailed. But I also like your writing as it is. Keep up the good work.

[Daichi Azure]

I was thinking since Midna and Zelda are conencted to one another in a sense that when Zant placed the curse on Midna it aslo affected Zelda at the same time but was much. Then Illia coming in contact with Princess Zelda on an errand to bring medicine to her. hope that inspires ya

Well, thanks for your help, guys. If I find the time and right circumstances I'll try to write a piece.

[Daichi Azure]

no problem...whoa a weeks gone by since we poked this thread...

Well, no one seems to be interested and because of that I'm rapidly losing my interest.

[Daichi Azure]

Well I'm intrested in it...I just wish people would keep poking this thing every now and again...seems if a topic is good for a while then meh...no one bothers with it...hmm...I know the Lon Lon Ranch is the only thing missing in Twilight Princess but you could make reference to Malon being an adult now and affected by the curse maybe...

[crazyazn]

Originally Posted by theshoelace

Well, no one seems to be interested and because of that I'm rapidly losing my interest.

its not that people are uninterested.

Originally Posted by theshoelace

Well, thanks for your help, guys. If I find the time and right circumstances I'll try to write a piece.

Its the fact that these people were expecting something after you said that. Basically, if you say "Yeah Ill keep writing" and you don't, you can't claim later that people were uninterested, especially given the comments so far, and your own response.

[Naonao]

What crazyazn said.