mind control, bimbo transformation

[Choppy]

Well I took matters into my own hand and joined and the wicked fun park was awesome!!!!

[BoutiqueTiffy]

I took a look at the site. It looks great and everything, but it's a bit too pricey for me. Everything looks great though. If the price comes down a bit, I'll definitely sign up!

[easton]

Originally Posted by wandering_spirit

For those who've checked, how many more pictures of that Fun Park process are they? Just wondering if paying for one month to see that is actually worth it.

The comic is over 310 pages currently, though there are other themes like bondage, breast enlargement, evil conversion and mind control involved. There's about 2 and a half bimbofications in the comic, the main one you know already that goes on for a fair few pages, a flashback with a bimbofication, but we don't get to see the end result, and the third is a member's request that's about 10 pages and is more a vision of what could happen if the Queen of Hearts stays in the real world for much longer.

[Amazeroth]

Originally Posted by impaction1967

Oh awesome! It's gonna have age regression!

Originally Posted by utopianfubar

age regression to infant ?

Yes it got a Age Regression, No, not to infant. From Ghost to old lady, from old lady to young woman

[Ran]

OK, I'm dredging something up from a little while back (I haven't been on this forum for months) but I just read this:

Originally Posted by catfish27

Anyway, I also should have mentioned The Funniest Joke in the World -- Bimbo Version, which is a nice quick read, from this weekend's MCStories update.

Except what I expected was a bimbo version of Monty Python's funniest joke in the world sketch, namely, a dumb blonde joke so funny that it turns anyone that hears it into a bimbo... so I'm now going to write a short piece about it. I usually only write TG stuff, so it might not be great, but...

Edit:
And here it is. It's rather rough round the edges. If you guys like it I might refine it a little. Dunno, it was merely a diversion. It was harder to write than expected because it's narrated by someone who isn't as verbose as I am, but this was necessary to get the punchline to work. It might be a little inspired by Bimboville for the nature of the bimbos, since I re-read it lately.

Again, first time I write a bimbo story (I usually do TG, sometimes with the increased beauty or on rare occasions the strengthened libido and lowered inhibitions you often see in bimbo stuff, but none of the, like, dumbness?)
Any and all advice is welcome, as always.

[olddude12]

I really enjoyed it. Would have liked the main character to get off scot-free. I think the story could have benefited from not shifting perspectives so suddenly. The bar maid could have also returned after Steffi's transformation, and joined in on the bimboisms, in order to drive the point home to the main character. Maybe I'm just bimbo-greedy.

[catfish27]

Great, now Germany is going to try to deploy their own version of the joke.

"My bimbo's got no nose!"
"How's she smell?"
"Terrible!"

[Amazeroth]

We have bimbo jokes since the 90s. Here it is called "Blondinen Witze" (Blond Jokes)

[catfish27]

Amazeroth, I bet Germany had blonde jokes even before the '90s.

I was making a reference to a specific part of the Monty Python sketch that Ran's story was inspired by: I think this YouTube link should take you right to it.

[rick404]

So I am a bit confused on the Metrobay/Erotic Illusion stuff. There are works on MCComix that are not on EI Metrobay comics with both communities sharing stories from the same authors and the same universe. Anyone know if any of that stuff is going to migrate between the two sites? Its sort of a PS3 vs XBox360 thing. Wouldn't mind both but can only afford one.

[easton]

Originally Posted by rick404

So I am a bit confused on the Metrobay/Erotic Illusion stuff. There are works on MCComix that are not on EI Metrobay comics with both communities sharing stories from the same authors and the same universe. Anyone know if any of that stuff is going to migrate between the two sites? Its sort of a PS3 vs XBox360 thing. Wouldn't mind both but can only afford one.

By the end of the year, all Metrobay content will be exclusive to http://www.metrobaycomix.com/

[Ran]

I hadn't really thought of bringing the barmaid back in. That's a pretty good idea. I originally planned for more bimbo-y goodness, but didn't want to confuse the narrative, particularly since it gets pretty cluttered after Steffi has her moment.

Out of curiosity, who do you class as the main character? The guy who is telling the story or the 'you' that is experiencing the tale? Steffi does get a lot of focus, but is more the object of the story than the subject. The woman from the start is actually the best developed character in my head, since she's a recurring character of mine but in this case is more a catalyst than a character.

I like to put stings in the tail of my story (and give the bimbos a terrifying weapon to accidentally misuse), I also like to write multiple endings allowing for branching sequels. If the guy with the joke gets off free, that sets up for more bimbo moments. Allowing the observer to walk off would be easily done and allows a more tied off ending. Optional ending section maybe? I wanted joke guy to be affable enough for you to listen, but blas? and foolish enough to deserve whatever happens to him.

Also, surely it works better as 'My bimbo has no brains'