Midna BE Story - Page 14

cyero · 06-23-2008

Lulz at the guard. It must be nice to be the ruler.

Also, nice twist thing. I still find it odd that no matter how long it takes you to get somewhere, you'll always see the thing that should have left an hour ago leave. =P

Daichi Azure · 06-23-2008

Hmmm...who thinks that 3rd bottle wound up in Termina?

cyero · 06-23-2008

OOh, I would like to see Lulu get BE'd... ;P

06-24-2008

You know, for some reason my filter will not allow me to enter the fourth page any longer. I use this filter to protect me from the more horrid content. Whatever words someone used in his post, I would like to request removal of those words.

Daichi Azure · 06-24-2008

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Originally Posted by cyero

OOh, I would like to see Lulu get BE'd... ;P

FYI: Zelda realms only...no Final Fantasy...sorry man...

crazyazn · 06-25-2008

now that you are expanding the story to include human characters, may I suggest inputting some sexual plot devices? I'm not saying you should include a full blown sex scene, but perhaps you should add a little bit more erotic into it to make it more interesting.

gongon1050 · 06-25-2008

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Originally Posted by crazyazn

now that you are expanding the story to include human characters, may I suggest inputting some sexual plot devices? I'm not saying you should include a full blown sex scene, but perhaps you should add a little bit more erotic into it to make it more interesting.

He already said that he didn't want to include sexual things into his story, I don't think asking more will make him include it, I think it would just annoy him.

Daichi Azure · 06-25-2008

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Originally Posted by gongon1050

He already said that he didn't want to include sexual things into his story, I don't think asking more will make him include it, I think it would just annoy him.

agreed...just be thankful for what have been reading...

06-25-2008

Yes. See, there's this line- see, it right there? It's a red line. I crossed the yellow line by writing this. Now, I prefer not to pass the red line.
Same thing with art. I despise pornography. I hate excessive nudity. Mild nudity... depends on how bad it is.

As you have seen, I have never crossed the red line. Allow me, in my honor, to keep it this way.

Also, I made the last piece very vague, to let YOU, yes YOU, choose who get's cursed first. That would open a sub-plot, and merge with the original story where Midna and Link look for the curse.

So, to spell out the choices:

Zelda gets Cursed: In a time of recovery, Princess Zelda requested resources from throughout Hyrule. It just so happens that a milk bottle that was brought to her was cursed.

Ilia gets Cursed: Ilia wanted to taste the goat's milk. She hadn't done that for a while. But little did she know that it was cursed!

Other Zelda Game Character gets Cursed: The man in orange ( Roal ) banished the cursed milk. But where? Somehow it ended up in the past, to be consumed by Malon, Ruto, Cremia, or some other Zelda girl. If this is your choice, also suggest which character.

geno13 · 06-25-2008

I'm voting for Ilia.

cyero · 06-25-2008

Lulu!

From Majora's Mask, silly Azure, it's Ruto's counterpart.

Drake G. Reaper · 06-25-2008

This story is awesome I would enjoy seeing the next chapter and are you gonna put some tf in this.

06-23-2008	#157
cyero Sir Psycho Sexy Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 2,955	Re: Midna BE Story Lulz at the guard. It must be nice to be the ruler. Also, nice twist thing. I still find it odd that no matter how long it takes you to get somewhere, you'll always see the thing that should have left an hour ago leave. =P

06-23-2008	#158
Daichi Azure Fourm Firefighter Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 962	Re: Midna BE Story Hmmm...who thinks that 3rd bottle wound up in Termina?

06-23-2008	#159
cyero Sir Psycho Sexy Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 2,955	Re: Midna BE Story OOh, I would like to see Lulu get BE'd... ;P

06-24-2008	#160
theshoelace Guest Posts: n/a	Re: Midna BE Story You know, for some reason my filter will not allow me to enter the fourth page any longer. I use this filter to protect me from the more horrid content. Whatever words someone used in his post, I would like to request removal of those words.

06-25-2008	#162
crazyazn It has Personality. Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 299	Re: Midna BE Story now that you are expanding the story to include human characters, may I suggest inputting some sexual plot devices? I'm not saying you should include a full blown sex scene, but perhaps you should add a little bit more erotic into it to make it more interesting. __________________ I HAVE FURY!!!!!!!!

06-25-2008	#165
theshoelace Guest Posts: n/a	Re: Midna BE Story Yes. See, there's this line- see, it right there? It's a red line. I crossed the yellow line by writing this. Now, I prefer not to pass the red line. Same thing with art. I despise pornography. I hate excessive nudity. Mild nudity... depends on how bad it is. As you have seen, I have never crossed the red line. Allow me, in my honor, to keep it this way. Also, I made the last piece very vague, to let YOU, yes YOU, choose who get's cursed first. That would open a sub-plot, and merge with the original story where Midna and Link look for the curse. So, to spell out the choices: Zelda gets Cursed: In a time of recovery, Princess Zelda requested resources from throughout Hyrule. It just so happens that a milk bottle that was brought to her was cursed. Ilia gets Cursed: Ilia wanted to taste the goat's milk. She hadn't done that for a while. But little did she know that it was cursed! Other Zelda Game Character gets Cursed: The man in orange ( Roal ) banished the cursed milk. But where? Somehow it ended up in the past, to be consumed by Malon, Ruto, Cremia, or some other Zelda girl. If this is your choice, also suggest which character.

06-25-2008	#166
geno13 Milky Meister Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 4,511	Re: Midna BE Story I'm voting for Ilia.

06-25-2008	#167
cyero Sir Psycho Sexy Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 2,955	Re: Midna BE Story Lulu! From Majora's Mask, silly Azure, it's Ruto's counterpart.

06-25-2008	#168
Drake G. Reaper Black_Dragon Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 104	Re: Midna BE Story This story is awesome I would enjoy seeing the next chapter and are you gonna put some tf in this.