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[Valeyard Vince]

Angeline is out now!



A floating, sentient torso with incredible superhuman abilities grows into a full bodied (and very busty) superwoman in Angeline, one of the most unique and surreal comics we have ever produced!



Synopsis: Created as part of a secret super soldier experiment, Angeline breaks out of the military facility where she was grown, wreaking all sorts of havoc.

Release Date: August 7th, 2017
Written by: Skindral
Artwork by: Octo
Tags: Breast expansion, super human, limb growth, muscle growth, height increase, transformation, science, OVERBOARD breasts

Issue Link: Angeline

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ALSO: What did you think about Angeline? Let us know your feedback in the comments section to help us improve!

[Valeyard Vince]

Hotel Infinity is out now!



Expanding breasts, shrinking women, and magically summoned cat ears are merely the beginning for Hotel Infinity, a new series from Expansion Fan featuring the widest variety of expansion and transformation fetishes that we have ever put into a single story!



Synopsis: In a hotel for wizards traveling between dimensions, a young human maid learns what happens when her employers aren't happy with her work ethic.

Release Date: August 21st, 2017
Written by: b-ridge
Artwork by: Wang (Sedna Studio)
Tags: breast expansion, ass expansion, shrinking woman, doll tf, inanimate tf, transformation, cunnilingus, catgirl, pleasure, magic, HUGE breasts

Issue Link: Hotel Infinity

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ALSO: What did you think about Hotel Infinity? Let us know your feedback in the comments section to help us improve!

[PyroWildcat]

What comments section are you referring to, VV? Because maybe I'm just being dumb right now, but I can't find one on the site itself.

Anyway, a little feedback for Hotel Infinity real quick. Hope it's alright that I post it here.

Any attempt that Lexie makes to "make those fuckers pay" had better fail or backfire. I really hate people who are deliberately a terrible coworker/employee and think they're above any consequences for it. Sure, these consequences may be unusual and over the top, but she should've seen that coming, considering where she's working.

[Blake Isaac Gordon]

Originally Posted by PyroWildcat

Any attempt that Lexie makes to "make those fuckers pay" had better fail or backfire. I really hate people who are deliberately a terrible coworker/employee and think they're above any consequences for it. Sure, these consequences may be unusual and over the top, but she should've seen that coming, considering where she's working.

I completely agree with Mr. PR Cat. Deliberately doing something wrong to another for some type of 'pay-back' is some messed up behavior unless is from a character with the moral equivalent of http://backtothefuture.wikia.com/wiki/Biff_Tannen...

(Please note, I have not read this comic nor purchased access to this site since 'Annie and the Blow Up Dolls')

If the main plot in 'Hotel Infinity' is nothing more than a female revenge punishment theme- then I would seriously consider Mr. PR Cat's suggestions.

Also you mention seeking feedback for improvement… Is this improvement for the sake of getting better or more along the lines of increasing the bottom line of your business model? I have advice. I won’t put it here and clutter up this nice thread. If anyone is interested I’ll start a thread, if not I’ll take the silence to heart.

[Valeyard Vince]

Originally Posted by PyroWildcat

What comments section are you referring to, VV? Because maybe I'm just being dumb right now, but I can't find one on the site itself.

Anyway, a little feedback for Hotel Infinity real quick. Hope it's alright that I post it here.

Any attempt that Lexie makes to "make those fuckers pay" had better fail or backfire. I really hate people who are deliberately a terrible coworker/employee and think they're above any consequences for it. Sure, these consequences may be unusual and over the top, but she should've seen that coming, considering where she's working.

By "comments section" I mean either on DeviantART or on forum threads like this PW! I apologize for not making that clearer!

Thanks for the feedback on Infinity Hotel! We've already got some twists and turns planned out for the next couple of issues, but I'll be sure to pass along your thoughts to the writer!

Originally Posted by Blake Isaac Gordon

I completely agree with Mr. PR Cat. Deliberately doing something wrong to another for some type of 'pay-back' is some messed up behavior unless is from a character with the moral equivalent of http://backtothefuture.wikia.com/wiki/Biff_Tannen...

(Please note, I have not read this comic nor purchased access to this site since 'Annie and the Blow Up Dolls')

If the main plot in 'Hotel Infinity' is nothing more than a female revenge punishment theme- then I would seriously consider Mr. PR Cat's suggestions.

Also you mention seeking feedback for improvement… Is this improvement for the sake of getting better or more along the lines of increasing the bottom line of your business model? I have advice. I won’t put it here and clutter up this nice thread. If anyone is interested I’ll start a thread, if not I’ll take the silence to heart.

Again, thank you guys for the constructive criticisms! We're always working towards improving the quality of our comics, and getting notes like these is a huge help!

And don't worry about "cluttering up" this thread. Please feel free to post your reviews, suggestions, and any/all other on-topic musings. We use "Fan" in the title of all of our sites because we want to make high quality fetish content written by fans for fans, and the only way we can be sure we're achieving that goal is by hearing from guys like you!

P.S. As the co-writer of Annie and the Blow-Up Dolls, I feel obliged to ask: is there any particular reason why that was the last time you signed up for a membership with us?

[Valeyard Vince]

Alien Desires is out now!



Alien Desires, the new sci-fi/rom-com combo from the writer of Stay Tooned, is finally here and fully loaded with all kinds of sexy shapeshifting-action!



Synopsis: A young man finds a humanoid female alien unconscious outside his house. As he helps her regain her health, he learns that she is one of the most highly sought for creatures in the known universe: a shape-shifter able to cater to the needs and wants of any species.

Release Date: September 7th, 2017
Written by: Loner2000
Artwork by: Mr. Tesmanic
Tags: breast expansion, ass expansion, clothes ripping, transformation, science, alien woman, GIGA breasts

Issue Link: Alien Desires

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[Blake Isaac Gordon]

Originally Posted by Valeyard Vince

P.S. As the co-writer of Annie and the Blow-Up Dolls, I feel obliged to ask: is there any particular reason why that was the last time you signed up for a membership with us?

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The Price Point... You might be thinking that's the same amount as the BE Story Club charges per month. Or you can say there's the option of paying in six month increments that works out to a much smaller bill of 100$ per year.

I can't justify spending that amount on an off-chance hope that of the 12 to 30 plus comics generated per year, I find something that I really enjoy.

The BE Story Club got real smart allowing for individual purchases. Yet there's no one (that I know of) doing independent detailed reviews. These "Official Update" threads with the cover image and a paragraph synopsis rarely gets my interest.

Now, when I saw Annie and the Blow-up Dolls I was interested because I'm a huge sucker for Josse and the Pussy Cats. Yet from what I read, the story was basic... I don't recall much about it other than the classic 'protagonist-standing-at 3/4-profile-after-getting-bean-bag-supersized-with-a-look-of-shock' pose.

(In BE Comics or Fiction) I cannot recall when the last time I saw a multiple panel growth sequence, or a well thought make-out scene, or the protagonist trying to fit into her now smaller clothes, or some intense dialogue where the protagonist is talking about her growth and wanting more.

But I am out of the loop. Right now for five bucks Patreon covers my BE
https://www.patreon.com/2hebubble/posts

That is where I am at now. Then there the sad fact that not a lot people are into BE any more. The activity on these types of forums is barely anything. I'm not pining about the 'old days' I've just figured individuals have moved on.

[SoylentOrange]

A lot of my comics involve multi-panel growths and dialogue. No make-out scenes yet, but I think I fit the bill on a lot of your likes, BIG. I'm not arrogant enough to say my comics by themselves are worth a membership, but just saying, the content's out there. ^^;v

(Also, would love to see your advice on the erotica business just in general. Might find something useful for my writing/editing services. ^^; )

[clovis]

Originally Posted by Blake Isaac Gordon

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Yet there's no one (that I know of) doing independent detailed reviews.

I've long thought that someone should be doing that- even considered it myself. But like yourself, I realize that while "expansion" in general might be my thing, there is actually only a fraction of what falls into those categories that I actually like. It's surprising how fine the line between an turn-on and a turn-off can be. So, I'd really only feel I could offer fair opinions on those subjects that land in my own particular wheelhouse.

I'm sure a group could be assembled with diverse enough interests. Any content creator could offer up their stories/comics/clips for free to be reviewed. Certainly a downside would be that sub-par work would be further avoided by those reading, but the gems would probably see even higher sales from an outside and trusted vote of confidence.

Thoughts?

[BillPratt]

Blake, I have one coming where the boobs start growing on page 3 or 4 and don't stop for the rest of the piece. Didn't fit in anyone struggling into suddenly too small clothes, but that's in the story after that.

If you want the girl who want big boobs, gets them, and still wants more... Well for some reason Bot Comics put Pics or GTFO out as a Bimbo Story Club title. In spite of the complete lack of bimbo. Their pricing structure may be be better, but not super smart all of the time.

[Blake Isaac Gordon]

Originally Posted by SoylentOrange

A lot of my comics involve multi-panel growths and dialogue. No make-out scenes yet, but I think I fit the bill on a lot of your likes, BIG. I'm not arrogant enough to say my comics by themselves are worth a membership, but just saying, the content's out there. ^^;v

(Also, would love to see your advice on the erotica business just in general. Might find something useful for my writing/editing services. ^^; )

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(This is from Scott McCloud's , Understanding Comics)
Are the growth sequences 'Moment to Moment' or 'Action to Action'? Most of the growth sequences that I remember (in general, not any one author in specific) always felt static. It came across to me that the most import aspect of the render was to show the beginning and middle and end boob size. That's no fault of the authors, because it is not easy to communicate to the artist exactly how you want the scene to look, especially if the artist is like, "BE... what ever, I just took this gig cause I like drawing big boobs."

As much as it pains me admit, a comic that did it really well was SRU Dream Girl with the initial transformation scene involving the main protagonist. It started with her becoming slender, her boobs continued to change as she walked up to the head of the class to do the math problem. She did the math problem and the changes progressed and then impacted her work on the backboard. Then when she returned to her seat her final transformation ended with sly commentary from the two main characters .

As for advice on erotic business/writing...I'd recommend listing to this
http://www.audible.com/search/ref=a_...sprefix=butter

Its fascinating about what Porn Hub did to the porn business, and mostly how 'judgy' collective society is.

Yet my big takeaway from the free audio book was the majority of the male consumers and patrons of (Custom) Pornographic Content are damaged. Before anyone goes to far and expresses that the term 'Damaged' is too harsh, please listen to the book. The loss of some of these individuals was real tragic, many times through no fault of their own.

My point: in erotic fiction give your protagonists a little 'damage'.

[Blake Isaac Gordon]

Originally Posted by clovis

Any content creator could offer up their stories/comics/clips for free to be reviewed. Certainly a downside would be that sub-par work would be further avoided by those reading, but the gems would probably see even higher sales from an outside and trusted vote of confidence.

Thoughts?

This would be a super bad idea if the content was provided to free for the reviewer.

The reviewer needs (must) pay for the content or it will impact their review of the content. Why, there will always be the fear that, "If I am too negative, the provider will stop sending me free stuff, thus I like free and thus I will always like the content provided."

Its the same thing on Amazon and Steam, if the reviewer gets it for free its indicated on their review. I often take those reviews with a grain of salt.