Midna BE Story

And I decided to go on a bit with Midna and Link. From now on I'll go back and forth from Midna to Lulu occasionally, OK?

The next piece is a bit longer than usual, because tomorrow we'll go on vacation and you'll have a week of no story.

'' After realising they had to hurry, Midna warped Link and herself to the Faron Spring close to Ordon. The cloud had landed here. Midna started running again ( bounce, bounce, went her breasts ), and Link followed. After a minute they stood in front of the entrace to the Ordon Village. Midna became a little red again- she was used to having Link close to her in this state, but she didn’t want to walk this way though a village in broad daylight. ‘‘ Link, we need to think of a way to let me pass unseen...’’, she said.

Link thought. How could he do that? The folks were everywhere. He was just about to create an idea that would’ve not worked, when a man in an orange cloak came out of Ordon. Link looked surprised, he had never seen this man before. Midna gasped. This was the same man she’d seen in the strange visions after taking the potion! ‘‘ It’s no use to come here... I’ve banished this part of the curse to another realm. My plan failed, for it landed in a similar realm to this one...’’, he spoke mournfully.

‘‘ But what if someone gets cursed there? Will the curse gain power here, too?’’, asked Midna. Link was a bit confused as to how Midna would know this person. ‘‘ I’m afraid it will...’’, he said. ‘‘ No time for mourning now, though! We must see to it that the other pieces of the curse get destroyed. Look!’’, he pointed up. The nearest cloud was seemingly going to land in the Faron Woods. ‘‘ Quickly! Go there- whatever object becomes host to the curse, destroy it! Hurry!’’, Roal ( the man in the cloak ) shouted.

Link and Midna turned around and ran ( bounce, bounce ). It was warm and Midna felt she was becoming a bit sweaty. Her cloak stuck to her buttocks, leaving an even clearer imprint. She felt a bit ashamed, but she knew Link could be trusted, and ran on without giving all of it another thought. Getting past thicker pieces of the wood was a pain with her huge breasts, but she kept running, watching the cloud almost disappear behind the trees. ‘‘ Faster, Link!’’, she said, running as fast as she could ( bouncing against a tree sometimes ).

There was no one in the forest, they only met trees. The cloud was very close to them, when suddenly it was out of sight- there were some trees in front of it. They ran in the direction they had last seen it, to find a wooden house. A cauldron was on a fire in front of it, with soup in it that did not look tasty. They were just in time to see the cloud fade in the soup. Link waited not a second. He buried a hole in the soft ground, poured all the soup in it and then put the dirt back on it ( it was a big hole ). ‘‘ Isn’t the cauldron cursed?’’, asked Midna.

Link shrugged his shoulders, but Midna looked very worried, so he walked to the door of the house. He knocked on it, holding the cauldron under one arm. After a while, a man with an afro haircut opened the door. Link pointed at the cauldron. ‘‘ Good day. Do you want that cauldron...?’’, he said, looking a bit sleepy. ‘‘ How much would you pay for it?’’. Link put the cauldron on the floor and searched his pockets for his wallet. He found it, and hoped there’d be enough money in it.

From it, he got a purple Rupee, three red Rupees and a yellow Rupee ( 120 Rupees ). He offered it to the man. ‘‘ That’s a good price... but to buy a really good cauldron I’d need five more Rupees.’’, he said. Link looked troubled- he didn’t have five Rupees. Midna had been hiding on the side of the house and had been following the conversation. She noticed the man wanted more rupees, so she started searching the bushes on her knees. There would always be a few in there.

After a bit of seaching, she found four rupees, but there were definately no more in the bushes. She lay on her belly with her breasts pushed on the ground ( which didn’t feel all too pleasant ), to see under the bushes. She crawled forward, and the grass tickled her breasts. She had to find a Rupee quickly or Link could not make the deal. She stood upand sighed, when she felt something cold in her cleavage. It was a Rupee- it had ended up there because she crawled through the grass like that.

She smiled. She had found five Rupees. ‘‘ Psst!’’, she said to get Link’s attention, who was still thoroughly searching his pockets for five more Rupees. He, in body language, told the man to wait and walked to the side of the house. Midna held five Rupees in her hand, and gave them to Link. Link was a bit surprised and quite relieved he was now able to pay the man. He smiled at Midna and gave her a grateful nod. He walked back and gave the man 125 Rupees.

As soon as Midna heard the door close, she went to the front of the house where Link stood with a cauldron. Link smiled and they both walked away from the house to more desolate area in the woods. Link grabbed three bombs from his bomb bag, and put them in a cauldron. With his lantern, he lighted the three fuses and both Link and Midna ran away from the cauldron. A huge explosion sounded , and they came back. There was nothing left of the cauldron- they could hear a shriek, as though the curse was killed.

‘‘ The other clouds will not land until days have passed, Link.’’, said Midna. ‘‘ The nearest one is going to the Kakariko Village, and will land in the afternoon tomorrow at it’s earliest. Let’s rest now, we’ll need extra strength for tomorrow.’’, she said. Link agreed, and they went to back to the Ordon Spring on the edge of the wood. The evening was still young, when a human and a Twili slept under the setting sun. When it was still early in the morning, Midna jumped up, breathing really fast.

She had a dream about a zora girl... she had been cursed. Midna was sure that this had actually happened. She felt a bond between the girl and her- and Midna felt that her breasts had become a little bit bigger. As Roal had sad, the curse was gaining in strength. If many would get cursed, the curse could regain it’s grip on her in full- and on hundreds of others. She noticed Link, being as alert as always, already was awake and was standing beside her. ‘‘ Link- someone in that other realm got cursed. I’m sure of it.’’, she said.

Link understood. He saw Midna was really shocked, so he put his hand on her shoulder and smiled at her to comfort her. Midna smiled back. ‘‘ As long as no one else gets cursed, I guess it’ll be okay...’’, Midna said, more to herself than to Link. Link nodded, and both went back to sleep. Midna’s sleep was not peaceful, and was constantly haunted by a Zora girl and her babies, and at one point a Like-Like. She tried to communicate with the Zora, but her presence was not felt. ''


The next part'll be about the Zora again, I think.

[vadrake]

By making smaller chapters for the minor characters (such as Lulu), you can break up the tension every now and again so that the story can still progress, but you aren't pressured into coming up with these major plot events every few days.

It may just be the fetish in me, but you may want to find a way to sidetrack Link and Midna so that the curse has a chance to drag more people into the story, You can even do a little monster based chapter on something, like a Lizalfos, just to create a short little chapter that can be used to start up anothe chapter.

Also, anytime you are planning to forshadow back to Link and Midna, you should end the chapter with some sort of break, then a small segment from there perspective (such as the curse growing in Lulu next chapter, she screams for some reason, break to Midna and Link, desribing them dashing towards there next objective.)

Likewise, when breaking away from Midna and Link, Midna should usually do some forshadowing that hints as to where the next chapter should be (or even just what it may be about, such as if she says "I hope this doesn't hard too many more people" in the chapter before Lulu would have been cursed. This throws people a nice little bone as to what the next chapter while also keeping the story intact for the next chapter.

Still, TSL, you are an amazing writer, I do come back for the plotline and details you do develop, I'd be amazing to see what you can come up with once you've got all the little literary tricks down.

[Forze]

This isn't just BE. This is art!

I LOVE how, throughout the story, Link never says a word. In addition, things like knowing the exact values of different colored rupees not only show that you know your stuff, but it adds a layer of authenticity to the tale. Very impressive.

What this needs now is pictorial accompaniment!

[cyero]

-thumbs up- Noice.

And remember, different Links, he won't recognize Termina.

[Daichi Azure]

Originally Posted by Forze

This isn't just BE. This is art!

I LOVE how, throughout the story, Link never says a word. In addition, things like knowing the exact values of different colored rupees not only show that you know your stuff, but it adds a layer of authenticity to the tale. Very impressive.

What this needs now is pictorial accompaniment!

agreed...

[Forze]

Originally Posted by cyero

-thumbs up- Noice.

And remember, different Links, he won't recognize Termina.

Ouch, I completely forgot about that. Of course, we could always look over that detail to include the best zelda game ever made... :P

Originally Posted by vadrake

By making smaller chapters for the minor characters (such as Lulu), you can break up the tension every now and again so that the story can still progress, but you aren't pressured into coming up with these major plot events every few days.

It may just be the fetish in me, but you may want to find a way to sidetrack Link and Midna so that the curse has a chance to drag more people into the story, You can even do a little monster based chapter on something, like a Lizalfos, just to create a short little chapter that can be used to start up anothe chapter.

Also, anytime you are planning to forshadow back to Link and Midna, you should end the chapter with some sort of break, then a small segment from there perspective (such as the curse growing in Lulu next chapter, she screams for some reason, break to Midna and Link, desribing them dashing towards there next objective.)

Likewise, when breaking away from Midna and Link, Midna should usually do some forshadowing that hints as to where the next chapter should be (or even just what it may be about, such as if she says "I hope this doesn't hard too many more people" in the chapter before Lulu would have been cursed. This throws people a nice little bone as to what the next chapter while also keeping the story intact for the next chapter.

Still, TSL, you are an amazing writer, I do come back for the plotline and details you do develop, I'd be amazing to see what you can come up with once you've got all the little literary tricks down.

Dragging more characters in is difficult, because I need to carefully plan things. I may try to do some side-things, but in the actual TP world there are few girls to be BE'd, and those who are are too young, which I prefer not to do.

Foreshadowing, huh? It is a classic writer's strategy. I may have a go at it.

Thank you! I'm really not that good a writer.

Originally Posted by Forze

This isn't just BE. This is art!

I LOVE how, throughout the story, Link never says a word. In addition, things like knowing the exact values of different colored rupees not only show that you know your stuff, but it adds a layer of authenticity to the tale. Very impressive.

What this needs now is pictorial accompaniment!

Thank you much! That's what I was going for.

It was inspired by Grim's pictures. At one point I left this project because of several reasons ( I think it was one month ), and I haven't seen him back since then... Maybe he's lost his interest.

Originally Posted by cyero

-thumbs up- Noice.

And remember, different Links, he won't recognize Termina.

I know my Zelda's, don't worry. And if I make a mistake I have you guys to help me correct it.

[Gobosan1]

shoe... have you met sockpuppet?
kupo

Originally Posted by Gobosan1

shoe... have you met sockpuppet?
kupo

Sockpuppet? I cannot say the name is familiar to me at this point.

Anyway, new piece of the story:

'' Lulu simply walked around her room slowly. She was not lazy- in fact, she was quite restless. Her breasts, she felt, grew through all this time. She was constantly debating herself. ?? This is not natural! You should go ask the professor!??, one side of her said. ?? You have seven babies to feed- it?s normal that breasts should become bigger with that amount of children to feed...right???, the other side said doubtfully. Arguments went back and forth in her head until she decided to ask the professor.

Her dress now fit real tightly around her chest, and started to get a little uncomfortable. She opened the door, and looked around- she didn?t want to be seen at this moment. There was no one around- the band members were all enjoying their vacation by laying in bed all day, or so it seemed, so she ran for the water and made a graceful dive that people would?ve gasped at. She swam out of the Zora Hall, and back in the Great Bay, avoiding anything that looked remotely like a LikeLike.

She could see the large building on the water, with a hook on top, from afar as she got closer and closer. She climbed on the dock and up the ladder. In front of the door, she felt something else. Her dress, which already fit tight around her chest, had started fitting tighter around her buttocks. ?? Does that have anything to do with giving milk to my children???, she said doubtfully. She knocked on the door. A strange, goat-like old man opened the door. ?? Good day, Miss.??, he said.

?? Professor, I?d like to ask your advice.??, said Lulu. ?? Why, come in, Miss. I?m afraid I have no chairs, but we can sit on the floor.??, he said as he stepped aside. ?? Thank you, professor.??, said Lulu, walking in and sitting down. She looked at the man, who?s back was hunched because of old age. With his help, her babies had been saved. She wondered if he had noticed anything of her breasts. He never wore glasses. She sat down on the cold floor and looked at an aquarium with a large fish in it.

?? Now, Miss, tell me how I can help you.??, said the professor. ?? The question is a bit awkward, but... is rapid increase of bust size normal shortly after pregnancy???, she asked. She expected the man?s eyes to go over her breasts, but they did not. His eyes remained fixed on her eyes. ?? I cannot say I have seen it often. Through pregnancy, the size of breasts may increase- in rare cases a lot- but this I have observed only in humans, never in zora?s. Zora?s are egg-laying mammals, and I haven?t studied pregnancy in particular.??, he said.

Lulu felt a bit hopeless- in short, the professor had just said he had no idea. ?? However, if any such changes would occur, since large bust sizes are rare among zora?s, I would advise to blame it on an unnatural cause.??, he added, seeing her doubt. ?? It will sound bizarre, but it may even be magic. I would advise a visit to Koume and Kotake, two strange witches that live in the Swamp near Woodfall. And if anything has been unnatural in what you have done, or eaten, I would advise to bring it to them.??, he continued.

Lulu stood up. ?? Thank you, professor.??, she said. ?? I am sorry I wasn?t able to be of much help, Miss. Good luck!??, he said. She stood up and walked out, feeling hopeless still: The swamp wasn?t exactly close, and she could not leave her babies alone for even a few hours. Diving back in the water, not taking the trouble of diving gracefully, and swam back to the Zora Hall to attend to her babies. ''

[Daichi Azure]

Nice addition and you remembered the potion making witches...-claps-

I know you used Red, Purple and Yellow Rupees for the payment, but there is one for 100 Rupees from Twilight Princess and wind waker. Thought it might help later on and below are a list of all rupees in TP. Once more that was a good useage of the Twin witches...

Green Rupee: 1
Blue: 5
Yellow: 10
Purple: 50
Orange: 100 (The Wind Waker, Twilight Princess)
Silver: 200
Huge/Gold: 300

[Forze]

Hello good sir! I just thought I'd let you know that Silver Rupees are in fact worth 100 Rupees, at least in Majora's Mask, where in other games they are used for solving puzzles. =D

[Daichi Azure]

Originally Posted by Forze

Hello good sir! I just thought I'd let you know that Silver Rupees are in fact worth 100 Rupees, at least in Majora's Mask, where in other games they are used for solving puzzles. =D

true, but the time in which they were used in this story was Twilight Princess, but yes in MM they were 100 rupees, but in Ocarina of Time they were only 5 rupees colored silver used as a part of the puzzles...