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Alright, so here goes nothing:
https://www.mediafire.com/?o20811ucqv64reg The comic I was promising. Like a couple of other sequences I made in the past, I'm setting the world and situation around this character who belongs to a TF game I've been helping out on for some time, which is set in a classic fantasy setting which nevertheless features some pretty high tech. The game's overall plot follows a ranger named Leona who goes on a quest to retrieve her little sister from the hands of a demonic cult, and within this general plot, as is often the case in RPGs, many subquests and branching narratives occur that may not necessarily hold much correlation to the overarching story, each subquest and encounter also offering its own varieties of game overs and TFs. In this case, we ignore the larger quest and centre around a prostitution circle uncovered recently by the young heroine, and her experiences when she is soon caught. I should apologize beforehand for this comic, as I did it on a whim and essentially rushed through it without much concern for logic or quality. I just wanted to do something involving this character, so in the last two weeks, while working on other more important projects, I made up this 224-panel comic to sort of get the hots off this idea. As such, the quality of the writing and illustrations may be rather low, with plenty of things that may be jarring or seem like mistakes (say, some bits of skin piercing through the clothes and so on in the pictures), even if more glaring mistakes are generally avoided. It also escalates very quickly, and features a lot of sex. Usually I prefer more progressive and slow-burning TFs, but as I was wanting to make something relatively short I went all-out very quickly. Apologies, then, to those who may prefer a slower and more gradual TF instead (particularly on the mental side of things). It's also my first time doing an actual comic so the layout may be somewhat strange at times. I figured a little too late that it was best to think the framing of each illustration accordingly with the dialogue that would be included, and as a result the speech bubbles and the likes occasionally creep in on top of the action. Nevertheless, I'm quite happy with how this turned out. All the above flaws considered (and maybe more, who knows), I think it's still quite enjoyable overall. Anyways, I hope you guys agree and like it! Leaving some previews below as well. If anyone likes any of the panels in this comic and would like an uncompressed version of it, feel free to ask. |
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My two cents, anyways. Others may disagree. I'm also talking, of course, about the bimbo as seen in fictional, fantasy situations like those depicted in this thread and not in real life, where this matter changes drastically and would actually be very worrisome. Last edited by babblingfaces; 02-27-2014 at 12:16 PM. |
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I'd love to read it now, but I don't have much time for privacy.
EDIT: Okay so I just finished it and thought it was excellent. I loved how she was already a bimbo for most of the story. I love slow tf and all, but sometimes you want to see more of what you came for. I thought it was a fresh angle that work really well. Last edited by olddude12; 02-27-2014 at 06:34 PM. |
02-27-2014 | #2225 |
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I plan to do some stuff along those lines. I can't really give you a date or anything though.
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<whispers> Though I would have loved to see her put through the machine a 2nd time. LOL! |
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That was really well done babblingfaces, congrats!
I loved the reveal! Kittie makes a beautiful sexy-innocent bimbo. The colors in those last couple panels are also sweet, great lighting! Great work, overall! My only criticism would be that the hair and some of the clothing materials sometimes look weird. Really just a minor complaint, though.
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Thanks for the feedback, guys! To Phoenyxx, I might in the future do a couple of standalone panels fulfilling that wish. I have some more ideas I'd like to work on for this sequence, more notably an alternate "good" ending, so I might at that point also upload some extra pics along with it too.
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Would you have any interest in doing an alternate ending where both girls beg to be put back in the machine? Cause hey, why should one bimbo get all the fun? :P |
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02-28-2014 | #2231 |
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I'll see if I can do it. All of this would have to be some time past March, as I have lined up a couple of matters that will keep me very busy these following weeks. After that, sure, I'll give it a try.
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02-28-2014 | #2232 |
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I would also suggest in future morphs to treat the nails as well if visible (just for an extra bit of fun). Nevertheless, I really liked this morph. Looking forward for more!
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