Devolution

[Harlock27]

Hey, Sunstrider, I was wondering what it would take for you to ply your writing acumen and continue more of the Corine Devolution Storyline from the beaddventure?

Would it be possible to commission you to continue adding to that story?

[Sunstrider]

I reached a "how the hell do i go from here" point when writing that particular branch, so i dunno. Probable anything about it would come off as repetitive, and there's a certain number of times before "Corine devolving and turning more women into cavepeople" gets boring.

However, one of my little projects involves writing a standalone version of the Devolution Revolution story. Although i don't know if i should upload it or not, out of respect for the many writers that have added to the original story on the site.

[Randy_McSporran]

Originally Posted by Sunstrider

I reached a "how the hell do i go from here" point when writing that particular branch, so i dunno. Probable anything about it would come off as repetitive, and there's a certain number of times before "Corine devolving and turning more women into cavepeople" gets boring.

However, one of my little projects involves writing a standalone version of the Devolution Revolution story. Although i don't know if i should upload it or not, out of respect for the many writers that have added to the original story on the site.

I would love to see this. And thanks for your Jurassic World story!

[Harlock27]

Originally Posted by Sunstrider

I reached a "how the hell do i go from here" point when writing that particular branch, so i dunno. Probable anything about it would come off as repetitive, and there's a certain number of times before "Corine devolving and turning more women into cavepeople" gets boring.

However, one of my little projects involves writing a standalone version of the Devolution Revolution story. Although i don't know if i should upload it or not, out of respect for the many writers that have added to the original story on the site.

Understood. Thanks for the response. For the record, I do love your devolution writing; it's top notch.

[Sunstrider]

Originally Posted by Harlock27

Understood. Thanks for the response. For the record, I do love your devolution writing; it's top notch.

I tried to give it a go, but it's the best i could come up with.
I'm trying to stay away from the Addventure lately, because i like stories with a ton of fluff, and it's kind of a letdown when someone adds to a branch and its just "bam, quick TF". I feel like you have to build up the setting, or things rapidly become as chaotic and repetitive as a zombie movie.

http://old.bearchive.com/~addventure.../1134808.html?

I wrote a bunch of savage/mental degradation on Superstories.net during the last year, just search for the She-Hulk Going Native story. Perhaps you might like that.

Originally Posted by Randy_McSporran

I would love to see this. And thanks for your Jurassic World story!

It's a funny thing, actually.
I saved all the episodes from the Devolution Revolution addventure branch around early 2016, but i ended up re-writing and adding to them until it was an entirely different thing, a story that looks like the lovechild of a zombie apocalypse flick and that Sound of Thunder movie (i.e.: a bunch of people trying to survive as everything and everyone around them devolve).

It's a little project i've been doing as a writing exercise (to polish my english, because it's not my native language) on what little free time i have.
It kind of stops being a fetish-y thing and then jumps into a straight fiction novel not unlike that horrible Devolution comic Dynamite published in 2016 (except with a little bit less social commentary).

Anyway, someone asked me at FA for the shopped picture at the end of the Jurassic World story. So, i'll put it here since i don't know FA's policy on photoshopped pictures.

[Mazoku]

Here's a clip from a comedy/horror tv show called Garth Marenghi's Darkplace; episode 4, "The Apes of Wrath" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVeUyzyNRjY , woman devolves a minute or so in.

[zokk]

This clip has been around...

[STRATTON]

It has been a long time since I have seen a good Devolution.

[Anahki]

Originally Posted by STRATTON

It has been a long time since I have seen a good Devolution.

And it will remain for a long long time, despite your empty effort for bumping the thread .

[alphinecentury]

Originally Posted by STRATTON

It has been a long time since I have seen a good Devolution.

BeingObscene posted a really monkey tf (herm) some weeks ago.

[Katsumend]

Edit: Already posted

[STRATTON]

Originally Posted by Anahki

And it will remain for a long long time, despite your empty effort for bumping the thread .

I have been looking for something to post myself, but have not had much luck finding any new content.