A Family Exchange (AR TG AP) - Page 2

Soccermom · 02-28-2014

I thought it was well written as is. If you want to change it, its your story, but please don't feel bullied into doing so.

Sphore · 02-28-2014

Well, my plan is to write an alternative ending next time I have the time to sit down and work on it, and then append the original version with a little content alert.

uttg · 06-26-2014

As someone else said, it is your story.
I had no problem with it.

Actually would have liked to see what is going to happen on the date w/ Justin.

And maybe continue and have the changes effect Justin's family.

bor40 · 06-26-2014

This needs to be removed and be brought to the attention of the moderator. The poster should be banned. This is absolutely disgusting.

qzar9999 · 06-27-2014

I'm well aware that incest is a major turn-off for some people, but there's no need to be so rude. I find it a bit off-putting myself, but speaking in my capacity as a mod, I don't think it needs to be removed. You can not like something, and you can say why, but please try to be more considerate of your fellow forum users.

10th_man_down · 06-27-2014

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Originally Posted by bor40

This needs to be removed and be brought to the attention of the moderator. The poster should be banned. This is absolutely disgusting.

So am I disgusting too? True I didn't like it, but I didn't dislike it either. This is just a fictional story....

Sphore · 07-02-2014

I don't even know what to do with this story.

If I've posted something that goes against forum rules, I'll of course take it down immediately. I've got no interest in causing trouble for the Process Forum.

I've had no motivation to write TG stuff lately, particularly since the imbroglio that followed the initial posting of this short story. I want to write stories that I enjoy, and that other people will enjoy, and I don't like learning that I am making people feel angry, disgusted or disappointed by my work. I still haven't come to terms with how I feel about this sort of writing myself- for me, there's plenty of guilt and discomfort mixed in with the enjoyment that I get from putting these narratives down in written form.

I suppose that one of the problems is that I've written several works which are quite tame, and several others that are much more sexual in nature. I think that some people, who had previously read some of my less graphic works, expected something that didn't blunder into such troubling topics, as this story did. I should be more careful to make it clear what is in store for each story that I write beforehand, so people can better avoid topics which bother them, and find topics that they like.

So to those who enjoyed this story, I'm glad that I was able to make something for you.

To those who were hurt or disgusted by this story, I'm sorry. I feel bad for upsetting you, and I wish I hadn't. Sometimes, I write things that deliberately make me uncomfortable, but this was not one of those cases. This story shows my failure to properly communicate a change of self, from one person to another. In my mind, as I wrote this story, I did not consider that the sex scene was taking place between a parent and their child- it was happening between a woman and a man, as their bodies adapted to match their new mental. I think that this is the important semantic difference, which prevented me from feeling that the scene I wrote was incestuous or pedophilic, but caused so many people to reach that interpretation. I didn't communicate this semantic as clearly as I wish I had, and that might be what led to so many people being alarmed by what they read in the story.

I've been given a lot to reflect upon. Thanks for your feedback.

Rashi · 07-02-2014

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Originally Posted by Sphore

I've been given a lot to reflect upon. Thanks for your feedback.

A content creator should never have to apologize. It wasn't that even 'strong'. Write stories YOU want to do.

Ctu · 08-13-2014

I love the idea of this story and need to finish reading it soon I love to see more like it myself, at least the part of people just steeping into another life and then ending up taking their body as well (best I can describe that part :P)

kyoshira7 · 08-09-2016

I thought the story was pretty good. I liked the way the mental changes occurred in the story.

02-28-2014	#13
Soccermom Going against the flow Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 1,965	Re: A Family Exchange (AR TG AP) I thought it was well written as is. If you want to change it, its your story, but please don't feel bullied into doing so.

02-28-2014	#14
Sphore Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 123	Re: A Family Exchange (AR TG AP) Well, my plan is to write an alternative ending next time I have the time to sit down and work on it, and then append the original version with a little content alert.

06-26-2014	#15
uttg Leecher Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 1	Re: A Family Exchange (AR TG AP) As someone else said, it is your story. I had no problem with it. Actually would have liked to see what is going to happen on the date w/ Justin. And maybe continue and have the changes effect Justin's family.

06-26-2014	#16
bor40 Leecher Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 6	Re: A Family Exchange (AR TG AP) This needs to be removed and be brought to the attention of the moderator. The poster should be banned. This is absolutely disgusting.

06-27-2014	#17
qzar9999 Purveyor of Porn Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Gallifrey Posts: 7,071	Re: A Family Exchange (AR TG AP) I'm well aware that incest is a major turn-off for some people, but there's no need to be so rude. I find it a bit off-putting myself, but speaking in my capacity as a mod, I don't think it needs to be removed. You can not like something, and you can say why, but please try to be more considerate of your fellow forum users. __________________ Tace atque abi. Plenus stercoris est. Editor/Writer, Shrink Fan and Transform Fan Check out Interweb Comics on Twitter or Instagram for all kinds of fun, sexy stuff covering multiple fetishes! Cezar's Comix - New 11/15! http://www.e-junkie.com/cezarscomix My eBooks at amzn.to/1CDS22w or bit.ly/1BZqaCp Quidquid Latine dictum altum videtur. My DeviantArt. Full list of my stories here. How I feel when certain users post anything.

07-02-2014	#19
Sphore Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 123	Re: A Family Exchange (AR TG AP) I don't even know what to do with this story. If I've posted something that goes against forum rules, I'll of course take it down immediately. I've got no interest in causing trouble for the Process Forum. I've had no motivation to write TG stuff lately, particularly since the imbroglio that followed the initial posting of this short story. I want to write stories that I enjoy, and that other people will enjoy, and I don't like learning that I am making people feel angry, disgusted or disappointed by my work. I still haven't come to terms with how I feel about this sort of writing myself- for me, there's plenty of guilt and discomfort mixed in with the enjoyment that I get from putting these narratives down in written form. I suppose that one of the problems is that I've written several works which are quite tame, and several others that are much more sexual in nature. I think that some people, who had previously read some of my less graphic works, expected something that didn't blunder into such troubling topics, as this story did. I should be more careful to make it clear what is in store for each story that I write beforehand, so people can better avoid topics which bother them, and find topics that they like. So to those who enjoyed this story, I'm glad that I was able to make something for you. To those who were hurt or disgusted by this story, I'm sorry. I feel bad for upsetting you, and I wish I hadn't. Sometimes, I write things that deliberately make me uncomfortable, but this was not one of those cases. This story shows my failure to properly communicate a change of self, from one person to another. In my mind, as I wrote this story, I did not consider that the sex scene was taking place between a parent and their child- it was happening between a woman and a man, as their bodies adapted to match their new mental. I think that this is the important semantic difference, which prevented me from feeling that the scene I wrote was incestuous or pedophilic, but caused so many people to reach that interpretation. I didn't communicate this semantic as clearly as I wish I had, and that might be what led to so many people being alarmed by what they read in the story. I've been given a lot to reflect upon. Thanks for your feedback.

08-13-2014	#21
Ctu Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 135	Re: A Family Exchange (AR TG AP) I love the idea of this story and need to finish reading it soon I love to see more like it myself, at least the part of people just steeping into another life and then ending up taking their body as well (best I can describe that part :P)

08-09-2016	#22
kyoshira7 Leecher Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 9	Re: A Family Exchange (AR TG AP) I thought the story was pretty good. I liked the way the mental changes occurred in the story.